Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

Author's note: Since the Anime Addventure is still suffering from technical problems, I'm posting this episode here again. The previous episodes can be found here: http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/frecent.php?tag=Dungeon+Keeper+Ami --------------------- --------------------- When the first wall...

Author's note: Since the Anime Addventure is currently not accepting new story posts due to technical problems, I'm posting this episode here. The previous episodes can be found here: http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/frecent.php?tag=Dungeon+Keeper+Ami Also, this entire episode was actually supp...

"We almost had to destroy the world tonight, rather than let the Dark Kingdom have it. " That line. It sounds spiteful and villainous. Who'd want to help someone like that? Seriously, what it says is "We almost murdered billions of people because we were losing." Someone who says...

Interesting. I didn't expect a timeskip until after all the known enemies were dealt with, but I approve - with canon behind us, this will be all new! Minor nitpick - wasn't Galaxia's attack city, or even planet-wide? Anyway, good work on showing us what the situation is currently like and what the ...

claymade wrote:Were there any particular parts or ways that you felt were jarring or incongruous that I could either tone down, or just explicate more, depending?

No, I just had the impression that the other Amazons disapproved of Cologne's solution. I may be misremembering things, as I pointed out before.

For an introduction chapter this works much better than the former chapter 1. Beneda having a crush on Dr. Tofu is fun. I'm a bit surprised how well she and Soap get along. I was expecting their interaction to be somewhat more hostile, or at least colder. Maybe I'm not remembering the previous parts...

Am I coming across like they're getting this info from some other source? If so, I can try to clarify somewhere that there's no alternate "official notes" or whatever they have on the Moon Kingdom, other than Altine. No, it's just that people going "Sunspots! that MUST be our ancient...

Actually, the Moon Kingdom did associate the sunspots with Metallia, since the cats recognized it as a sign of Metallia's return. And given that the Amazons have an AI from someone who lived through it herself... Yes, afterwards, because the cats lived through it. There wouldn't have been any offic...

Actually, the sunspots start back at the start of episode 42, not in 44. If that triggers them coming over, they've got plenty of time to arrive. Subsequently, the spies watching the DK portal observe the Senshi attack, overhear that Kunzite is dead from their conversation as they leave the portal,...

I'm not sure how the timing for this could work. The Sailor Senshi enter the tunnel to the North Pole in episode 44, and kill Kunzite. Luna mentions they need to hurry and launch a surprise attack on the Dark Kingdom. In the next Episode, the bandaged cats watch TV, which first mentions the earthqua...

Crescent Pulsar R wrote:Also, at least in the subbed version of episode 11, it's Jadeite himself who says that he will kill the senshi, not Beryl.

Yeah, my mistake. It's Episode 10 not 11, about 3 minutes in, when she gives him the order. "And also find the warriors and kill them!"

I'd argue that even that wouldn't make him stupid. First of all, his goal up until the last episode was to gather energy, and as far as that was concerned Beryl had no complaint. So long as he was getting enough energy, he had no real reason to get personally involved. He wasn't actually getting en...

camk4evr wrote:They don't actually fly, they hover or float in place and they don't seem capable teleport of teleporting short distances. Not that I can remember at any rate.

Zoisite does both.

Interesting start. Since Laharl looks like an elf, I assume we will be able to avoid the duel typical for the beginning of Zero crossovers? And does Louise count as his minion, enabling him to learn her magic? Or does he, as familiar, count as her minion? Both might have fun results.

The writers are thus left up with one choice: how does Jadeite lose? Unfortunately, they chose for the heroes to come up with a plan of action that works on the fly (since they're too concerned about keeping the planes intact, even though having secret identities should have saved them from the res...