Not bad, but you're missing several elements. The first is the rows of seams across the tunic front. You can see them clearly on Starbuck, in the middle picture in the second row. You can also see them on Adama's uniform, in the lefthand picture in the second row.
The seams are because the front of the uniform tunics are quilted in horizontal strips.
http://www.kobol.com/costumes/c04.html
This may be a better shot of the uniform.
http://www.battlestargalactica.org/cata ... arrior.jpg
Here's another shot of the jacket, just for kicks and giggles.
http://www.battlestargalactica.org/cata ... jacket.jpg
The second is the multiple buckles on the boots, which were motocross boots that were painted brown.
http://www.kobol.com/replicas/rc04.html
As for the gloves... There is a source.
http://www.battlestargalactica.org/cata ... gloves.jpg
One last thing, which may be too ambitious. The gold checkered trim would be used on the sailor flap, and the Galactica star insignia should be in the two back corners of the flap.
Here's a closeup of the trim, just in case you want to try it. This has the checkering on both sides of the solid stripe, but on the uniform collar, the checkering is only one one side of the stripe; the outside or bottom. In other words, the solid stripe is closest to the neck, and the checked stripe is outside that.
http://www.kobol.com/replicas/images/trim.jpg