Since WWII Germany is something of a specialty of mine...
You've got the shoulder belt on the wrong side. Its purpose was to support a pistol holster, so if she's right-handed, the pistol would be on her right hip.
Waffen SS never wore a totenkopf on the left collar tab. Wehrmacht panzer troops wore them on both collar tabs, and theirs had no lower jaw. The SS who did have something like that were allegemeine SS, prison guards and the like. The standard Waffen SS uniform has the SS runes on the right collar, and rank insignia on the left. Only the Totenkopf SS Panzer Division wore a Totenkopf on the right tab, in place of the SS runes.
More comments later; I gotta go out right now.
Back now, so to continue: The ribbon is for the second-class Iron Cross, and it's too big in your drawing. It goes through the buttonhole for the second button from the top on the jacket.
For the symbol, I'd guess that a downturned crescent moon would be the right one, so if you have the eagle holding that in its talons instead of the circle, it would fit the theme better. Speaking of the eagle, the one on the belt buckle is wrong. You've got squared-off wings on it. That was the version used by the Wehrmacht and Kriegsmarine. The SS used a more rounded version, in which the significant feature is that the wings have five extending feathers, the center one extending the farthest, and the ones above and below it are stepped back sequentially.
This web page shows the variations. Scroll down to find the SS eagle.
http://meltingpot.fortunecity.com/austr ... /eagle.htm
It's much better with the stockings. Poor women didn't wear them; nylon and silk were rationed because they were used in parachutes and the like, and thus stockings were a luxury item. If a woman were well-off, she'd wear them to show that she could afford to.