by Kadunta » Thu Aug 28, 2008 12:13 pm
Two things to note... I agree with Spokavriel about their faces and e.g. the blond's left arm being shadowed inconsistently.
One other thing (something I have been found guilty of as well) teetering on the edge of being possible is about the blond's pose: her head might be turned too far to her left. I tried it in front of a mirror and I don't think I managed to turn my head that far. Then again, I'm pretty stiff and might be wrong about that point.
Edit: I stand corrected then.
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Kadunta on Thu Aug 28, 2008 12:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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