Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

The bit with Pluto having a kid wasn't entirely unexpected, but it does feel a bit... odd... that it was, or rather is, a boy after you explained the reason why all the senshi are girls and why all the first born are girls made the news seem like it went waaaaaay out to left field. I suppose if you ...

I load up on Dew and hit Fanime every year, but it isn't for a few months yet.

Ranma / Maho shojo lyrical Nanoha
It blows my mind!

Heaven's Deamon wrote:*points to the fact that one of the girls is actually from a Saotome clan* You could easily make her related to Ranma in some way.

Wait which one?

Just for the sheer randomness have a Naruto cross. After the manga Ranma is searching for strong opponents when he hears of a distant Dojo with a incredibly strong master. If you have not figured it out, in one of the Naruto Filler episodes Rock Lee opened a dojo on top of the Hokage Monument howev...

I rememberone from some time ago, but don't know the name. Ranma became adopted in the the clan that Nodoka originaly came from after she divorced Genma for something. There were only a few chapters and I think it was abandoned... Sorry for not being able to help much.

I weep, but fear not for they are tears of joy! I just can't stop crying buckets of tears!!! On a more normal note is Setuna going to get cursed? Will Setsuna save Ranma from his curse? How will haveing an atractive older man effect M&M? If he is cursed then how will the other Outer senshi deal ...

There are a few large battleships in the Gundam-verses that you could use. None of them are 'holy crud look at that!' worthy, but there are a few.

I don't see ranma letting that tentacle rape thing go.. And she didn't even seem to fight nearly hard enought. I agree. Most of Ranma's actions seem IC, but that one bit just seems so OOC I feel like I'm reading a diffrent fic with a diffrent person who has the name Ranma by chance. It also feels w...

Not bad for a start, but I think you need to develope Ranma a bit mre to be honest. Right now he seems more Caotic Neutral with a few evil-ish quirks. I think you wanted him to be depicted more like this...

I may have missed it, but Ranma can see Nabiki's new face tatoo why exactly? It might be the fannon talking, but I thought that you either couldn't see then unless you allready knew they were there, or were forced to subconciously pass over and forget them unless you already know what those types of...

A good recent example of where Fannon is better than Cannon would be book six of the Harry Potter series verses all the fanfiction that simply rewrites the entire year while only drawing a few plot points if any.

There is little I can add to this as I don't write anything regularly, but I feel the need to point out that Manga and Anime often differ on some points on their own without fannon. Because of this variation sometimes you end up with false fannon. An example of this is if a fanfiction mentiones some...

Just having Ranma try to become a senshi without a major arternate reason seems weird. Maybe Ranma could descover Michru's senshi identity and try to join for that reason. I can see him doing something along those line rather easy, but it feels weird that he hasn't been given a reason other that a '...

Reading this made my eyes hurt almost as bad as my head. Please try to develop a plot before trying to write a fiction, or at the very least a timeline.