Mashima Heavy Industries, hu? Why not? It seems like a nice idea there. Also, it would push Ranma's/Shego's tolerance of Cat Androids to the brink. And after all, every green-skinned villian needs a red-haired aversary to fight, not make out with, ne? Besides, doesn't Ranma hate 'pink'?
OMAKE, OMAKE, OMAKE!!! (Please feel free to use it at the end of the fic.) “That sounds like it’s some sort of decoder ring they have in the cereals,” muttered Sakura curiously. She blushed immediately, thinking that she may have offended the visitors. Minaho worked hard to suppress her desire to st...
Ah, the joys of insanity. What a coup. It's great to see this fic up and reading again. As it was, I was just going back over some of your past fics too...but more of that in a moment. Lets see, Nodoka and the contract: ..., ..., nice section..., ..., AH! The tea, is it still warm, or has it cooled ...
that's really not constructive criticism or a helpful comment, Anime_Freak317. For one thing, that changes the entire idea to something radically different. for another, Kirby's powers don't work that way, and for a third. That's not a story, it's maybe a scene at best, probably not even that. How ...
I'd say leave Ranma-chan as a huminoid female. Make her about 4'6" instead, turn her hair and eyes pink, and unlock her ability at the dinner table when she accidently sucks in Nabiki's account book. Just imagine the possiblities that could ensure when Ranma retains Nabiki's 'buisness' deals. W...
Hmm you could also have the town be renamed after Ranma if you wanted. Be another fair reason for no one to know the new name the town, perhaps The blue Eyed ralts fan club basicaly over took the town's majority and decided to rename the town some how to honor Ranma. Perhaps Ralts Town.. hehe If yo...
“My, my,” she said, “you seem to have had a good day.” "My, my, she said . "You seem to have had a good day." While Kasumi was still deep in her thoughts, Ranma had come back and asked, “hey! Is everything alright?” This startled the brunette and she almost fell down. She just giggle...
Better fight scene. One small problem with it. I saw nowhere where Alakazam recovered his spoon. Towards the end there, I just saw where Ranma for some reason didn't have the spoon and Alakazam crossed them. Maybe I overlooked it. As for recover...it could be when one is able to combine four element...
Aw man, now I can't stop thinking about Ranma-chan-sama using her cat-of-nine-tails on Kasumi to get her out of her air-headed phase...and NOT being sucessful at it. Akane would be a jealous b-atch (nothing changing there), and Nabiki would beg to film the scenes. Dam you Dumbledork. Now I have to f...
I just thought of this. Thinking of the legendary Pokemon, maybe this line is how they made Mew. The female line could be Mew and the Male ine could be Mew-two. There's a concept that no one ever connected before. M2-strong and powerful, Mew-quick and can change pokemon. Nice balance in my opinion.
I just thought of something. One of Ranma's main traits was his ability for speed, right? Moreso when he was she. Why not have 'her' working on a combo of telekanisis (sp?) and sprinting to minimize the air flow and create a new attack?
So is this Sabrina going to be Ranma's master? I'm thinking even with all Ranma has learnt Sabrina could probably beat him and capture him. If you remember from earlier post on past chapters, this is not going to happen. Ranma may train with Sabrina, but won't be captured in a ball...for long at le...