Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

'm not really sure how to take out of context a whole paragraph but it looks amazing lol!. Anyhoo. Just for the record I don't care for reviews or feedback, but I always believed a story was a gem thanks to them alone. Personally I find certain pieces a bit rushed like Genma's daughter, specially th...

Wow Lawohki, I can't believe you are so hard a judge after so many successful stories in FF.net. There are several fanfiction where Ranma is hated by most and even tossed on the street by even the Tendos. Mousse finds "her" and become acquainted like a couple. I went back to see that possi...

Oops, I just realized what you mean over the first comment.

Yes, I guess I have a tendency to still use a lot of words to explain a situation, thus ruining the feeling behind the scene. Ill correct that, thanks a lot!

I'm sorry LawOhki, I have this knack to start a story without the whole background and slowly build the reasons why characters are stuck on that precise situation along the next chapters. So far, the idea for me to accept Ranma as an item for Ryoga is only if Ryoga becomes somehow a girl, making the...

Thank so much Spica75 and gsteemso. The more I learn, the better people can enjoy the stories. Now!. I changed most of the tips LawOhki has remarked on the last post except the time frame. The way I see it, Ryoga gets lost for months at the time. If he tried a serious relationship with Akari before ...

Thank you and wow. I never thought you would be so nice to reply so soon. My only question is this, Should I modify the chapter according to your advice and post it again on this thread, or just fix it and upload it directly on FF.net?.

Thank you Laohki for reviewing my story so fast. I am going to try and describe the different points you cover as explanations, but I want to do it "Not" to contradict you. I just want to explain the reason why I wrote the story in a certain point of view. 1.- The suffixes of san, sama and...

Ok. I followed some of the comments people made from "Sins of a mother" Fic I did earlier. This story is about Ranma and Ryoga as a couple. I know I was told that pairing is not very famous for on this site, but I can't alter the two characters a love to write about, they are my main focus...

Guys, I am not sure how to delete or close this topic so I am going to leave it like this. Please ignore this post since what you say is true. There is no point in asking you for advice about a story that is sequel to another story. I am about to finish it and I thought I should post instead a new s...

Um. Thanks for the feedback I guess. I've been so immersed in my problems that sometimes it gets too hard to make sense of what I write. I know I am missing a lot of writing rules and although I try for the stories to make sense, when no one at FF.net said anything but good things, I thought I was d...

Thanks Lawohki and blackcat101, I'll try to address your sentiments as best as possible without causing any ill feelings from anyone. First, I admit I have never officially learned how to write a story. I read dozens from others and according to my judgment, I started writing my own. The warning on ...

I'm sorry, perhaps I didn't mention that what I write, I do mostly out of my depression. In fact, I became so depressive over the years that writing became a release for my negative feelings. I know this will upset many readers and I apologize for it. I don't mean to be rude or tactless, but I was w...

Hi, my name is Jerry and I recently made a post on C&C about my stories. I'm not sure how to do this even when Sunshine Temple helped me previously with some orientation. For starters, the story I wrote has about nineteen chapters. It begins with Ryoga as my main protagonist and the character I ...

Thank you, I really appreciate the help, and since you offer it so politely I would like to know where can I go in the forums to learn about what section does what. The second question would be. . .Should I keep reposting on this topic about the story and how it evolves, or do I need to create a new...

Thanks so much for showing me the way. I apologize for the last post, and I would love to learn from you guys. A friend who likes what I write told me to create an account in fukufics. At first I refused because I thought the forum was only for Sailor moon. . .Sorry about that. Anyway, this friend t...