Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

Chosen edits done.

Your wise words are welcome my powerpuffy friend. Your sugestions will be edited in where I think it works. Hopefully it will reduce that headache this story is giving you a bit though I can't promise complete relief. I think the mountains 'real' name transpates as Fist Perfection Mountain though th...

Andy
In answer
A) I didn't think of it
B) I have plans for Ku lon

You have given me a new idea to do later on in the fic though that adresses this thanks.

Ranger5 glad you like it

Ok, I realised I was trying to shoehorn 1 and a bit chapters into a single chapter. Not good. Here's the final draft for C&C I hope I've addressed your comments in it. If not well repeat them and I'll try to do it ether as an edit or in a future chapter. Yes Spokavriel there is a story their, in...

This is 1 of 5 skips taking to the end of the S season where the story begins, from the looks of it I need to do a 3 or so month later skip as well to explain more. Most of your questions should be adressed in the next skip. Yes it was the flames which de-aged him. Yes the name change is needed, hav...

Doing a series of timeskips in order to get to the 'start' of the story in chapter 2. I'll post them for C&C as I do them so you don't have to slog through the whole thing time and again. The questions I have are, are their any mistakes and does it work, should it be expanded anyway? 1st Timeski...

edits done and I have the rest planned out now. :) Thanks again for the corrections Dumbledork, late night writing seems good for creativity but bad for spelling. For your continued assistance the next story on the writing list is Revenge Rebirth :D. Spokavriel... Can I have part of my notes back pl...

Thanks. I'll see about edits later today. Hadn't thought of the Phoenix pill, I'll edit that. The answer is that it's an innate quality of Mars and therefore Ranma in this fic. The same will be true of the other 'elemental' senshi. Yes the woman is Setsuna I wanted to have it so someone could guess ...

First part of the chapter up for C&C, more to come but I'm tired and need to start writing that with a clear mind, ie not just yet. Need to think exactly how I want to do it since I'm transitioning from Ranma to Rei somewhat here. Annoying thing is I know how the 2nd/3rd chapter will go already ...

Actually I'm in a similar situation. A better question might be does anyone know any good sites that can translate simple sentences for attacks?

sry for highjacking the thread SpaceKnight

I have to make a choice. I was orginally going to have chapter 1 jump to time of the start of the Ranma series and go from there. Re-watching the Nanoha series I came up with another Idea. To jump forward to the time of Ryouga and Ranmas first meeting. My own preference goes neither way as I like th...

Shadow Veiled Senshi (Ranma/Sailor Moon X-over) By Shad4c Disclaimer: Ranma 1/2 and Sailor Moon belong to their respective owners. Not me. This piece of fiction is purely done for entertainment purposes and no profit is made from it in any form. Authors Note - << >> = start/end of flashbacks. Fight ...

You know what I've changed my mind, this chapter isn't even half done. I can't believe I was actually going to post this. :x Still comments are appreciated. Am I going in a interesting direction with this or should I try something else? What sort of thing would you like to see in future (not saying ...

Edited. Much appreciated Comartemis.

Ok, slightly expanded and experimental in parts because I’m not 100% on how well the writing flows. Final version of SVS 6. Will be posted on FF.net sometime tomorrow barring major problems pointed out. C&C greatly appreciated. Shadow Veiled Senshi (Ranma/Sailor Moon X-over) By Shad4c Disclaimer...