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Re: Veela One Half Chapter 3

If that happened to my flacon, I'd seriously consider not using it again. Ritual contamination plus physical contamination?! Yeah, about as bad as doing radio isotopic analysis on slurry sample from the sewage plant at a nuclear plant. Some smart guy stacked some containers of sample material in fr...
by borgrabbit
Thu Dec 15, 2011 2:58 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Veela One Half Chapter 3
Replies: 17
Views: 19649

Re: Veela One Half Chapter 3

Darn it. I did a search for the word and never found it. I guess my flacon was buried under the fewmets. :oops:
by borgrabbit
Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:13 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Veela One Half Chapter 3
Replies: 17
Views: 19649

Re: Veela One Half Chapter 3

'worser' is correct. It's an old form but can still be used today. I think it sounds better here, more solemn.

Oh yeah? Well, my life is much worserer than yours!
by borgrabbit
Mon Dec 12, 2011 7:40 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Veela One Half Chapter 3
Replies: 17
Views: 19649

Re: Veela One Half Chapter 3

“Eh? What does he want know?” now After Kasumi had left the room Nabiki turned back to her flacons, flagons (like mugs), but flasks might be more appropriate. Chem labs use various volumetric and erlenmyer flasks as well as beakers, fleakers, graduated cylinders, pipettors and repipettors among othe...
by borgrabbit
Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:06 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Veela One Half Chapter 3
Replies: 17
Views: 19649

Re: Untitled ranma xmen evo au

Great start and if you incorporate at least the spelling and grammar suggestions of the previous posters, I will be happy to see much more.
by borgrabbit
Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:53 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Untitled ranma xmen evo au
Replies: 14
Views: 17358

Re: Wild Charon Chapter 3 rewrite

But they disappeared before she could use them they disappeared.”

But, before she could use them, they disappeared.”
Duplicated duplication...
by borgrabbit
Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:53 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Wild Charon Chapter 3 rewrite
Replies: 10
Views: 11576

Re: The Disorderly Princess and the Fiery Steed: Ch. 4\5 start

Glad to see you putting words into this story, again. I am looking forward to seeing Ranma apply some of Hinata's techniques, though, would they be as effective against ki using martial artists?
by borgrabbit
Sat Aug 27, 2011 4:07 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Disorderly Princess and the Fiery Steed: Ch. 4\5 start
Replies: 15
Views: 18782

Re: A wish gone horribly wrong chapter 2

Yes, it happens several times in the anime. Someone does something she doesn't like, then clouds and thunder happen followed by collapsing billboards or other structures (my paraphrasing). During this she just frowns cutely and tries to suppress the anger.
by borgrabbit
Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:13 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: A wish gone horribly wrong chapter 2
Replies: 16
Views: 21197

Re: Wind and Wave chapter 1

One thing that might need addressing is the tendency for the curse to crop up at awkward times. It seems likely that warm tea would spill in front of someone and why wouldn't Ranma walk out of the bath in male form? Soaking in the hot water would leave Ranma a him, as the cold rinse comes before the...
by borgrabbit
Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:56 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Wind and Wave chapter 1
Replies: 19
Views: 13393

Re: Death Reborn Evolution Ch 10

Setsuna could guide them to one of the Sahara's dune seas or Mojave desert in the manner of Burger Becky's stories.

Spell phrases:
Death Reborn Riot!
Finger Tip Surprise!
Unhealing Boil!
Hani pa ti!
A fongool a bep! Err...maybe not that one.
by borgrabbit
Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:26 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Death Reborn Evolution Ch 10
Replies: 35
Views: 21294

Re: BDAN 10

The room to Demona’s room was closed

Did you mean door?
Other than that, nice reading.
by borgrabbit
Sat Mar 19, 2011 1:55 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: BDAN 10
Replies: 1
Views: 3080

Re: Azumanga DaiZero Chapter 2 (95% complete)

Grammar Nazi:

Yet another does of weird.

Yet another dose of weird.
It was unusably forward of her,

It was unusually forward of her,

Turning interesting.


Haiku stew...or okonomiyaki:

Person—not object
Her familiar knows that
Slavery offends
♥♀♀♥
by borgrabbit
Sun Mar 13, 2011 6:29 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Azumanga DaiZero Chapter 2 (98% complete)
Replies: 2
Views: 2673

Re: Silent Heart 03 preview and help

This whole house stunk of the sent.

This whole house stunk of the scent.

First, that she despritely needed him.

First, that she desperately needed him.

Eagerly awaiting more.

☺☻♥♦♣♠•♂♀♪♫☼►◄↕‼
by borgrabbit
Thu Mar 03, 2011 11:33 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Silent Heart 03 preview and help
Replies: 8
Views: 6576

Re: Back to Elementary School Chapter 2

“I really only have you best interests at heart.

“I really only have your best interests at heart.
:D
Now I have to try and find the manga.
by borgrabbit
Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:27 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Back to Elementary School Chapter 2
Replies: 11
Views: 6533

Re: Azumanga DaiZero

So, where did all the other girls go? You have piqued my interest!
by borgrabbit
Sat Feb 19, 2011 3:44 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Azumanga DaiZero
Replies: 8
Views: 6453
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