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Looked over it a couple times. Everything seems fine enough. Didn't notice anything glaring that needed a form of fixing, although it really seems like you overuse the smirk. Sorry I can't do more than this, but I've got finals to study for -_-
by Urborg
Sat May 13, 2006 10:54 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Siren's Calling, Chapter 12 - Crisis
Replies: 16
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