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Yes, it is better. There are some grammer mistakes in this thought. However as the last month was over a war broke out between Ningenkai and Meikai and Yusuke was called to battle, knowing that his daughter would be in great danger he asked for a favor from the ruler of Reikai, Koenma. However, as t...
by Anime_Freak317
Fri Feb 22, 2008 10:00 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Urameshi Sakura (YYH/Naruto) Prologue
Replies: 8
Views: 3951

Okay. So Keiko and Yusuke had a kid, she's Sakura, and now she's in the Hidden Leaf Village with no memory of her past. Interesting twist. Also, she's friends with Naruto and Ina (right name?) while not crushin' on Sasuke. Unique approach, I'll give you that. However...the story seems too jumbled an...
by Anime_Freak317
Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:37 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Urameshi Sakura (YYH/Naruto) Prologue
Replies: 8
Views: 3951

Well, who said that Minako "HAD" to become Venus? The Moon magic is still within her, right? And this could be how Artimis comes into the scene. He finds Pompom instead of V-chan, visits Mau with Ranma and Laria too. Maybe he could even befriend Harry. Well, just a thought.
by Anime_Freak317
Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:23 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Wild Magic Chapter 20 (Chapter Finished)
Replies: 84
Views: 37691

Okay, more scenes for Ranm...I mean, Lina and family (of the feminine kind). Maybe a trip to see grandma (Triple X from Hoodwinked) who likes extream sports, but tries to hide it from her family. Then a trip to London. This could be where Ranma meets Sailor V by accident. And a way for Sailor Pom Po...
by Anime_Freak317
Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:45 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Wild Magic Chapter 20 (Chapter Finished)
Replies: 84
Views: 37691

So Ranma is a NEW version of Serenity's sister. I like it. A couple of things I would recommend is... 1.) When ever Ranma is in female form, refer to him as her. Some people get confused as to whether he's male or she's female at times. Like this last scene: As soon as he did, he felt a tremendous a...
by Anime_Freak317
Thu Feb 14, 2008 8:26 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Mew Mew Moon [SM/Ranma] Episode 1...
Replies: 18
Views: 10266

Sabrina...it's an okay choice. BUT that would mean that Ranma wouldn't be traveling around and can you honestly say that he's one to be sitting idly around one place for years. Especially in the Poke-verse? Why not use Max as he befriended a Ralts already and promised to come back for it later on. H...
by Anime_Freak317
Sat Feb 02, 2008 7:58 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: A Ralts in Moonlight Chapter 3 (Chapter finished)
Replies: 35
Views: 16030

Ah, so maybe one of those Poke`mon he meets would be a Ditto. That would be something, hu? I like the concept. Waterpulse...I don't think that would work too well for him. Brick-break, It could if Ralts' weren't so physically weak. Maybe some ground type moves like petal dance, or even leach seed. S...
by Anime_Freak317
Sat Feb 02, 2008 12:27 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: A Ralts in Moonlight Chapter 3 (Chapter finished)
Replies: 35
Views: 16030

I'd say to shorten the sleeves, maybe eliminate them all together, and put some glove on. Also a lighter shade of lipstick. Cherry red just doesn't seem to work too well for her in this pic.
by Anime_Freak317
Sat Feb 02, 2008 12:15 am
 
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Combining Uniforms, How to make a Fuku similar to this?
Replies: 1016
Views: 562659

I'd add a corona of power surrounding Nine there. Much like the Naruto/Kyuubi powerups. You just have the hair going up and wild where as her being surrounded by the aura would make it more intense. Plus the visable spectrum of power would make the senshi quake in fear too.
by Anime_Freak317
Sat Feb 02, 2008 12:10 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Resurrection of the Silence, Chapter 9
Replies: 18
Views: 10005

Quick Q. Is Ranma's curse perminate(sp?) or not? I noticed that you have yet to get him/her/it around the hot water.
by Anime_Freak317
Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:42 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: A Ralts in Moonlight Chapter 3 (Chapter finished)
Replies: 35
Views: 16030

:lol: Oh the outright destruction and mayhem that would bring. I do like the idea of a Kim Possible villain freeing Happosai early, and the idea of Global Justice helping with getting rid of Happosai makes sense as well. I mean, he IS a terrible evil. And it is also when Geminai was good too. Befor...
by Anime_Freak317
Mon Jan 21, 2008 5:03 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Take the Green and Go Chaper 15 (Chapter Finished)
Replies: 69
Views: 27021

Here's an idea for Happosai. 10 years ago you say. Maybe it was GJ that helped Soun and Genma seal him away (slipping more sleep aide into the saki, putting him into a 'standstill' state. i.e. Please teacher Kei-kun). More specificly, Geminai. After spying on Shego (surprise surprise), he sees the d...
by Anime_Freak317
Mon Jan 21, 2008 4:44 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Take the Green and Go Chaper 15 (Chapter Finished)
Replies: 69
Views: 27021

Spokavriel: Yeah, I can just see that feminine side of in the mindscape. Long hair, anerexic, weak, and surprisingly, whereing a full kimono. :oops: Ellen Kuhfeld: Bridge, or wall? Maybe both as it would have been locked away thanks to Genma. Maybe a scar from where the nail punctured her skull and ...
by Anime_Freak317
Mon Jan 21, 2008 1:24 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Take the Green and Go Chaper 15 (Chapter Finished)
Replies: 69
Views: 27021

Dumbledork wrote:I agree with the kiss idea. After all, Kim can't have the last word.


No, she can. It could prove to be better that way.
by Anime_Freak317
Sun Jan 20, 2008 7:32 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Take the Green and Go Chaper 15 (Chapter Finished)
Replies: 69
Views: 27021

Good to hear...for the next chapter that is. While I disagree with Kodachi being the best M/A in Nerima, I could agree that she's the best 'weapon's' M/A in Nerima. Until Mousse shows up that is. :? I still think that a kiss is needed in this chapter to round it off too. It doesn't matter with who, ...
by Anime_Freak317
Sun Jan 20, 2008 5:55 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Take the Green and Go Chaper 15 (Chapter Finished)
Replies: 69
Views: 27021
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