Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

and I've seen no mention of the fact how the Ginzuishou was created. True. That's why I said "probably". But it being older the Solar System (4.500.000.000 years) is a fact. If it can be broken up into pieces, I do not think that it is 'part of natural order' at all. Inconsistence of the ...

Interesting development :) I wonder who that guy is. Other than that, I found no problems. There is nothing to correct (except , maybe, one-two small typos) scavaging ? scavenging On the background (although it probably doesn't apply to the universe of your fic): the world of "Lost Universe&quo...

Previous chapters: my website ff.net 1. I am sorry for posting my own stuff before commenting on other's work first (namely, IceSquared). I just too damn tired today, I'll do that tomorrow. I post this and say good-night. 2. The events so far (for those who waited too long and forgot some details): ...

A side branch: discussing it on the Миката forum (mostly in English) where I say that, I quote, The Return, Generation Lost... Now I know for sure that you are a sadist, Sunshine! Poor, poor Ranma... *sniff* and also suggest to mark Windborne as a horror story. (A...

In short: I completed reading the manga, and I think our fellow authors should know this: 1.) Ginzuisho is a part of natural order. It is probably as old as Universe itself (there is a confirmed fact that it is older than our Solar System). If we assume it was created, then most probably by Allmight...