Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

The following is subject to revision yet... Well the food Neri brought was certainly helpful, but as to the magic she did, that accomplished her own goals. Her people, as was said, (or should have been anyway) consider themselves gaurdians of the oceans, and what she did should give them a small lin...

The usual-- %'s start a comment to myself, and are auto removed in the html version. C&C appreciated. I'll go through it again in 2 or 3 days with whatever is put here before editing the final version. ---------- \chap{Escape} ``I didn't expect that, at least not so soon.'' said the god. ``Dang!...

Chapter updated -- See first post.

The televising was meant to lay a general, ``Oh I remember them from back then.'' when their identities did eventually come out. The mother and son were no one in particular. They were mrely a view of the gallery. I borrowed the description of the mother from where I used her in Ice Squared, althoug...

[This post originally contianed part of the story, but its all on ff.net now under
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3050278/1/ .]

Wedding scene/misc added. That is all for now.
It is almost read to go to ff.net

Okay, I'll expand the wedding scene before posting. It may get done tonight. I'm not sure.
I also need to work the word 'revenge' into Setsuna's last lines, but thats a minor point.

FYI: -- minor update done Alathon, while I agree in principle. This was intended to be a short one shot that I only spent at most a night or two on, and has already gone well beyond that. You quoted the wedding scene, but simply doing that segment in detail could easily take up a nights writing and ...

I added a bit on the end, and corrected some things. I wouldn't consider that a revision. I'll keep in mind the comments tomorrow when I go through it again. Likely it won't be expanded in a major way, but that doesn't mean I won't expand a few things. If anyone wants any specific bit expanded, then...

At the time of writing this, what is posted in the first post is now complete, saving any changes that occur as a result of its posting here.
I have attempted to fix the corrections that were noted as well as others I found. If anyone else sees others, well that is what this is here for..

Thanks for the C&C/edits/etc.
My intent was that ranma would remember the prophecy, rather than just forget all about it and ruin Setsuna's plan.
I'll likely wait on the edits till i get more written.

Final Version...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3050278/1/

I'll think about your first comment. If memory serves i'd have to do a minor change to a posted chapter to change the emphasis, although i suppose you could have his initial resistance fade quickly, which is, more or less in character. As I said, I'll think about it. I don't really disagree with the...

Notes: The usual. Things starting with \ are LaTeX macros. % starts a comment line, that is for my own use and not seen in the final version. This chapter has seen significant revisions since it was last put here. Some of them just yesterday of the edit date. Feel free to post suggestions or correct...

Thanks for the fixes. I already mentioned it to Wargiver, but just to be official, I have no current plans to return to Nerima for awhile. That doesn't mean I'll spend 20 chapters on Venus. At some points things will reach "status quo" and then I can skip over some of the intervening years...