A Ralts in Moonlight Ch. 6 (Finished... yes, I'm serious)

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Postby KonokoHasano » Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:21 pm

asterion: o_o You're right; just because Ranma's physical abilities were paralyzed, he/she would have still been able to use psychic power and get back at Haunter.

I can't believe that didn't occur to me. I'll have to fix that up XD

While Ghost-type attacks are super effective against Psychic types, Ghost-types themselves are not immune to Psychic itself.
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Postby KonokoHasano » Tue Jan 13, 2009 11:49 am

After working on this chapter since July, I can honestly say that I am finally finished. The first post has been updated.

The chapter is shorter than usual, but gah... I don't think I could have gone any longer on this chapter.
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Postby jasonjkay » Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:56 pm

Yay the chapter is finished, I was worried that you had totally given up. Good chapter, haunter was especially fun to read about. Cant wait to read the next chapter of whatever you write.
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Postby Dumbledork » Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:26 pm

I almost cried for joy when I saw the update. I was afraid that you'd have left for good.

I haven't reread the old chapters and so I can't remember if it has been mentioned, but how long has Ranma been in the Pokémon world now?
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Postby KonokoHasano » Tue Jan 13, 2009 5:44 pm

jason: Nah, I've just had problems up the wazoo with this chapter for some odd reason. For some reason, even though I had ideas of what I wanted, I couldn't get them out.


Dumbledork: Haven't left; just had issues with this chapter. I actually refused to allow myself to read any manga or anything until I finished the chapter, and I ended up completely drifting away from browsing Fukufics, the Fanfiction Forum, and reading other fanfics during the time. Hopefully with this, I can get back to normal. x.x

And I don't have a definite timeline, but I've been thinking somewhere between two to four months or so.
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Postby Kimina » Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:28 pm

jasonjkay wrote:Yay the chapter is finished, I was worried that you had totally given up. Good chapter, haunter was especially fun to read about. Cant wait to read the next chapter of whatever you write.

I've been worried the entire time, and my hope has been gradually draining. I talk to her pretty much every day. Poor thing gets distracted with lots of stuff.
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Postby bissek » Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:37 pm

What will be the reaction of the Pokemon Trainers in and around Saffron when they realize that the local Gym Leader, a psychic Pokemon expert, went out of her way to track down and bring back one specific Ralts? That would probably make the rumors about Ranma skyrocket. Being unique is one thing, being unusual enough that the local expert takes an active interest in you is another.
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Postby Dumbledork » Wed Jan 21, 2009 12:07 am

Just a thought. Couldn't Sabrina buy colored contact lenses for Ranma to hide the unusual color of his eyes?
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Postby KonokoHasano » Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:38 am

Kamina: And how many times have I said that I haven't given up on my stories? Every time you bring up about how I've 'always been so diligent' and 'at this rate it'll take forever to get to such and such', it makes me WANT to put it off and makes it feel like just a chore. My current pace is done so that it doesn't burn me out and that I DO keep my interest.


Bissek: First and foremost, the trainers would be incredibly curious, and a majority of them would probably want to challenge Ranma just to see how great he is. The 'Blue-eyed Ralts' could very well become a 'stepping stone' of sorts for trainers who want to test their mettle.

... Ranma's definitely in for some interesting times.

Dumbledork: It's possible, but then again there's also the fact of word spreading around quickly.
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Postby Dumbledork » Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:35 am

It's possible, but then again there's also the fact of word spreading around quickly.


but then, everyone in the Pokémon World is incredibly dense. Or how do you explain that Ash and friends as well as any Jennies and Joys never manage to identify Team Rocket under their ridiculuous disguises?
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Postby KonokoHasano » Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:19 am

1.) Using Team Rocket's disguises is a bad example, because then you'd have to go and question why nobody ever seems to be able to identify other people in various shows and media who use a flimsy disguise as well. It's more or less treated as just a gag in the long run.

2.) Team Rocket CAN do convincing disguises when they want to. They just don't need to.

3.) Not all Jennys and Joys know Team Rocket, and so being fooled by their disguises doesn't mean anything.

In fact, nobody outside of Kanto and Johto even KNOW of the organization of Team Rocket, and so them being fooled by disguises doesn't mean anything.
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Re: A Ralts in Moonlight Ch. 6 (Finished... yes, I'm serious)

Postby borgrabbit » Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:56 am

Wonder if you might like blue eyed Ranma as a ralts doing his/her ralts fu thing. The smaller one is avatar sized.
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Re: A Ralts in Moonlight Ch. 6 (Finished... yes, I'm serious)

Postby KonokoHasano » Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:27 am

o.o That's friggin awesome and adorable, borgrabbit, thanks! Image
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