Dive into the Unknown Ch.2

This is for posting Fiction and C&C replies ONLY. Note this does not have to be a "fukufic" or evenfanfiction. All longform creative writing allowed. Replying posts must give actual commentary, no "GREAT IDEA" or "THIS SUCKS".

Postby lwf58 » Sun Nov 12, 2006 6:43 pm

Can't see anything wrong with your corrections. Looking good.
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