Plan B.

[nuclear death frog]

Heck, gotta be some reason why Genma is petrified of his wife, even though she's absolutely clumsy with the family katana.

That in itself is an excellent reason to be petrified of her.
The best swordsman in the world doesn't fear the second-best; he fears the complete novice.
Why? Because a novice's moves and strikes cannot be predicted nearly as easily as a fellow master's can. The novice's movement and strikes will follow little or no pattern, and thus are unfathomably more difficult to anticipate.

[Atlan]

i remember a fic where nokoda was master of the Drunken Kendo, a prodogy so great that she could access the skills without alchol.
It always seemed to right, made so much sense.

[nuclear death frog]

i remember a fic where nokoda was master of the Drunken Kendo, a prodogy so great that she could access the skills without alchol.
It always seemed to right, made so much sense.

That was Trimatter's Final Approach Ranma.
In canon, of course, it has no basis at all. Nodoka in canon clearly has very little, if any, skill with the sword (I think she even says in her intro that she hardly ever takes it out of its sheath). She's certainly *not* a master of any sort of style.

[AscendedWarrior]

That is one very disturbing thought... It also sounds very entertaining

[deathgeonous]

Cryslshake was right. When Ranma relises his messed up life is all, in a way, his fault, he'll blow a gasket.

[Waruiko]

He will blow more than one. I would think it warrent a reaction along the lines of calminy leaveing the room, traveling to an unihabited planet, and then bthing it in unholy fury and atomic fire.

[Ozzallos]

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[Sunshine Temple]

Oooh... very fun.
I do worry about the other thoughts that Ranma is getting, becoming too much of a Harvy.
Though now they merely seem to be another persepctive.
Heh. Kasumi should be great fun in this too.

[b_omega]

Nice!!!!
A little bit dark than your usual fiction, but then these fic is the geometrical oposite of your other fic, so you've reach your goal actualy.
I wonder what his dear mother had to say..... but i got the feeling we're about to find out.

[Ozzallos]

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[Sunshine Temple]

No Harvy here. Those are actual thoughts Ranma will have to live with until she finds out what's happenening and gains more control over herself. It's a component she;'ll eventially be able to control free of metallia's influence.

Good.
Yeah right now Ranma's not sure about her past life. But with a bit more self awareness she will be better.
Cool. Looking forward to more.

[Screwball]

I like it. Especially Kasumi at the end 'Well that was predictable.' The fact that I find bits of what is obviously going to be fairly dark funny probably says something bad about me.

Something was off. Very off with the martial artist.

I think this would read better as 'Something was off with the martial artist. Very off.'

It shown with something she had never seen in Ranma before… malice and cruelty.

'It showed something...'

If that control suddenly ceased to exist, the closest analogy she could think of was loosing a deadily predator among them.

This works, but I suggest actually naming a predator. So, something like '... loosing an angry lion among them.'
I look forward to more of this.

[GenocideHeart]

This is a little OT, but what the Hell is a 'Harvy', if you don't mind me asking?

[WG_Writer]

Looks good, I will need to see more before I can make any plot comments though.

[Questara]

This is a little OT, but what the Hell is a 'Harvy', if you don't mind me asking?

Well, there was Harvey the Rabbit an invisble (except to the main character) talking rabbit, from a really old movie named predictably "Harvey" http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0042546/ ; also in Farscape, there was a Scorpius in Criton's head that he called harvey (presumably in reference to Harvey)