Resurrection of the Silence Chapter 3

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Postby pspinler » Tue Aug 29, 2006 11:26 pm

liked the fight scene revisions. thanks.
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Postby Metroidvania » Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:43 am

Any other objections, comments, or concerns before I post this to FF?
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Postby nova » Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:48 am

how did mistress 9 find ranma during the fight to have him or her change in to mistress 9.
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Postby Anime_Freak317 » Wed Aug 30, 2006 2:21 pm

Sending them to the cursed??? Strong possibility that I like. Maybe having them land near the edge with Cologne being a little disoriented from her 'travels' falls into the spring of the drown Yoda. That would be hilarious.
Great chapter.
Quick note...Someone mentioned in Akane's presence that Ryoga was cursed. Might want to change this or have someone explain to her what his curse is.
JoT is on hold..again. Legal issues and work modes have been incresingly harsh. Chapter is 25% done. Sorry.
Tear of the Lone Wolf P( :cry:
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