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Sending them to the cursed??? Strong possibility that I like. Maybe having them land near the edge with Cologne being a little disoriented from her 'travels' falls into the spring of the drown Yoda. That would be hilarious. Great chapter. Quick note...Someone mentioned in Akane's presence that Ryoga was cursed. Might want to change this or have someone explain to her what his curse is.
JoT is on hold..again. Legal issues and work modes have been incresingly harsh. Chapter is 25% done. Sorry.
Tear of the Lone Wolf P(