This is for posting Fiction and C&C replies ONLY. Note this does not have to be a "fukufic" or evenfanfiction. All longform creative writing allowed. Replying posts must give actual commentary, no "GREAT IDEA" or "THIS SUCKS".
Agreed, it is a terrific story so far, and the fact that you reposted the first chapter so many times, was frustrating at first, but it made the final one the best to read, good job!