Take the Green and Go Chapter 12 (Chapter finished)

[deathgeonous]

TerraBull said

Hmm, the thought would occur to me if he was a maschoist and attempt to wed Shego to control/ raise his children?

deathgeonous says

Well in that case, like father, like son. KUNO PUNTING TIME!!!

[KonokoHasano]

Wow, now THAT is a scary thought.

For the next chapter, I'm thinking about Shampoo trying to make another move, and then have some things of the Rhythmic Gymnastics.

I'm wondering if I should have Cologne decide to have a little fun and attempt the the Cat's Tongue pressure point. I mean, she's an old woman who likes to plan things to keep her entertained. Of course, that could come back to haunt her.

Terrabull: Want to know what series were meshed in within the house hunting?

Nuku Nuku (OVA)
Love Hina
Urusei Yatsura
Excel Saga
Nin x Nin Shinobuden
Steel Angel Kurumi 2
Tokyo Pig
Sailor Moon (Yay Makoto)
Read or Die TV
Bartender (The assistant in the bar -- Ryu. I ended up putting him in there because he was an assistant before he got his own bar)

[deathgeonous]

Wow, an even dozen crossovered in one chapter, if you add Ranma 1/2 and Kim Possible to your list.

Good job man, good job.

[KonokoHasano]

O_o Wow, I did have 12 series.

You know, I honestly wonder what Kim's family would think if they found out. More than likely, her father would say 'at least it wasn't with some boy'. The guy really has some complex with that issue.

I can't help but think that I should have had Ranma drunkenly flirt with Kim a little more.

Edit: For some reason, I've been having the strongest urge to figure out SOMETHING to do with fox-tails. I'm not sure why either. Grim Reaper Kitsune... now that's odd.

Anyway, there's something I'm slightly wondering about for my fanfic A Surviving Mau. Would it be an interesting idea if later on after Galaxia and her minions are defeated that Ukyo somehow manages to gain the title of Sailor Chu. I mean, she DID mention that she wished she could have mouse ears and a tail in an earlier chapter.

[CJN]

I'm wondering if I should have Cologne decide to have a little fun and attempt the the Cat's Tongue pressure point. I mean, she's an old woman who likes to plan things to keep her entertained. Of course, that could come back to haunt her.

No, the Cat's Tongue is:
- Getting old
- Ranma/Shego already knows more moves than canon Ranma at this point
- Ranma isn't a obsessed with staying male
- It could be hazardous to Cologne health, and she knows that

However, if you could find a reason to do it to Genma instead ....

As for Ukyo as sailor Chu, why not? But, it seems a little early to decide that. You still have a couple of years until Sailor Moon R begins, and after that three seasons of Sailor Moon before Galaxia.

[Kadunta]

Noticed only one typo on my superficial readthrough.

The woman’s partner shook her heave vigorously. “Arisa, let’s hot hurt the woman! Let’s just step around her and get the android, please?” It seemed the tone of voice was almost pleading. “There’s no reason to hurt civilians!”

[Kimina]

Congratulations Kimmy, you just had your first lesbian kiss

[KonokoHasano]

CJN: Yeah, that's true on all four points.

Kadunta: Thanks

Kimina: Wanna bet she's probably going to try and get back at 'Sheila' in some way? Maybe try and knock her unconscious for the 'embarrassment' of it all.

I can honestly see Shampoo finding out and trying to play on Kim's emotions to try and get the redhead to help.

[Kimina]

Usagi knowing Ranma and the way she is now (yes I said she instead of he, bite me! :3) there'll be more happening to Kim than 'Sheila'.

[KonokoHasano]

The amusing thing is, I'm thinking of having 'Sheila' become friends with Kodachi

[Kimina]

Hmmm. I'm not too sure. Don't forget Kodachi's as insane and stupid as her brother and father, in her own way. Odds are she'd fall in love with Ranma again and think Sheila's keeping them away from each other. Don't forget about how she is.

[_Xellos_]

I don't think that revenge will be the first thing on Kimmie's mind. She'll probaliy try to reasure herself that she likes boys first. Poor Ranma better watch out.

As for Kodachi the whole hate the female half and love the boy half is over done. Better to make Kodachi a closet Shego fangirl which would be scary, and have her trying to defeat Kimmie to get Ranma.

[Spokavriel]

“You don’t know the horrors that the guy can cause to use all!”

Cause for us all, cause us, but cause to use is more like explaining that there is a rational need for using an item.

Beautiful situation use in the Haircut announcement. I wanted to see that palmtree cut off so many times TYtytytyty for doing it.

No sooner than that was said, an explosion sounded in the distance and caused an unidentifiable person up into the air.

I'm not even certain what you meant to use in this sentence from context. If that's not a sign it needs a bit of work I'm not sure what is.

“Of course, I ‘Sheila’ wouldn’t look too bad acting Hawaiian.”

Akane says this but I don't think that l fits in there.

Oh Kasumi hitting Genma with the extending stave is really nice. Almost got me going as strong as the Cabbit Nabiki but luckily I recovered a bit faster. Just the fact it was her and so perfect for the moment.

They were even more surprised when said woman’s hands began to glow green before a thing green disk appeared in one of the hands.

Nice think disk wouldn't happen to be another Dragon Ball Inspired attack would it? I seem to remember Krillin using something like that on a certain supersized Monkey's tail.

You actually had Ranma check out the Hinnata Sou. I would so like it if you could get her in there but I don't think their antics would work well with the story style that's already going. Especially if Kaola started getting interested in the people from Nerima. Su's dangerous enough on her own without more ideas from the Possible gang. Great tour of apartments.

Living in the same building with the PE Teacher, Hinako, and Makoto Kino. Oh boy. I'm am so picturing a scene where Sheila apologizes to Ranma for eating habbits after seeing Usagi. A paper argument. How far is the Library from this apartment?

I really liked the chapter and almost regret that you will probably work on one of your other stories. Then again I like the other stories so that's why it's only almost. Now to read the other comments on the chapter and see if they inspire more comments by me.

You know there has to be some way to get SheGo into a Fuku. Maybe not next chapter or the one after that but there has to be a way.

I see other people saw the Hinata and ways to mix with Ranma. The problem is that even though it could have fit with Ranma or Kim Possible the dynamic working between the two already kinda locks out Love Hina. I mena Cameos are fine but I'm glad Ranma didn't end up living there with all of SheGo's problems.

I like the idea of Sheila becomming a target for long pent up payback by Cologne. Afterall she's not a young girl anymore. And it would be a great way to finaly define how long things have been for Sheila. I mean imagine SheGo's suprise finding out that girl is still alive. And Cologne's potential satisfaction of getting a bit of her own back even after the centuries passed. It's all in the attitude and the characters could go that way if you want.

The Surviving Mau idea for Ukyo would be cute but feels more like a one shot or Eppilogue moment to me.

Friends with Kodachi. I can see it but I don't really see that friendship getting much of a chance till after the Rythmic Gymnastics competetion. I'm really wondering how that's going to go with KP Being the obvious Redhead for the task this time.

Hmm the Kodachi as a Closet Fangirl of SheGo has potential. It would even gain some credence through her obsessive need to experiment with traps toxins and having pets that even Senior Senior would approve of. Could Kodachi be seen as wanting to be a super villainess seeing SheGo as the true brains behind Dr. Drakken?

[max7xile]

I don't think that revenge will be the first thing on Kimmie's mind. She'll probaliy try to reasure herself that she likes boys first. Poor Ranma better watch out.

As for Kodachi the whole hate the female half and love the boy half is over done. Better to make Kodachi a closet Shego fangirl which would be scary, and have her trying to defeat Kimmie to get Ranma.

Now that would be an interesting idea. The whole Kodachi in love with Ranma is overly done. Maybe have it where Kodachi goes after Ron instead of Ranma. You should have it where Kim spotted Kodachi kissing a paralyze Ron and then Kim accidentally kiss Ranma. Of course, after kissing Ranma, she becomes more confuse and wondering if she was bisexual.

Another anime that you can xover with is Kimagure Orange Road. Not sure if you seen the anime, but it's a good series.

[KonokoHasano]

I honestly think Kodachi could be a good person if she had someone to help her... plan out a few things. Helping Kodachi with a few hellish things could be something that Ranma could do as a side hobby.

>,> Then there's also planning out a way to get different Yakuza and gang sects to go against each other. That's still a mini-plot I have in mind for sometime in the future.

I'm also considering having Ranma try and get in touch with Nodoka soon. I'm thinking as Ranma is getting his traveling pack out of the guest room at the Tendo's, he decides to snoop in Genma's pack a little more.

I don't plan on Nodoka accepting anything right away, and I think it could provide a chance for something to weigh on Ranma's mind. The fact of thinking that if he did have a mother somewhere, she'd be a better person than Genma, or was worried about him. The reality would make him a little peeved off, and everyone better watch out for a Ranma/Sheila who happens to be peeved off

I also need to bring in Wego again since they are searching Japan, and I need to bring in the next Kim Possible villain as well.