Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

by **Sunshine Temple** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:08 pm

I revised chapter 1 of Generation Lost.
That is the oldest active writing I have.
Here it is
Going to follow this with revising the next couple chapters.

by **Tovath** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:04 pm

pretty good. Is this a crossover or from your own imaginashin

by **Sunshine Temple** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:38 pm

the Lockridge situation is my own creation, later disclaimers should be clearer on that.
The rest of Gen Lost can be found Here

by **TerraBull** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:22 pm

Nice story, worth the re-reading.

by **Fafhrd** » Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:31 pm

The rewrite did clear up some continuity errors and make for a better read over all. Is there a new chapter coming at the end of the rewrites?

by **Sunshine Temple** » Thu Oct 05, 2006 7:53 pm

Fafhrd wrote:The rewrite did clear up some continuity errors and make for a better read over all. Is there a new chapter coming at the end of the rewrites?

Hopefully. Ch10 is being writen.
And that would be nice.

Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

Gen Lost ch1 REVISED

Gen Lost ch1 REVISED

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