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Gen Lost ch1 REVISED

PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:08 pm
by Sunshine Temple
I revised chapter 1 of Generation Lost.
That is the oldest active writing I have.
Here it is
Going to follow this with revising the next couple chapters.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:04 pm
by Tovath
pretty good. Is this a crossover or from your own imaginashin

PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:38 pm
by Sunshine Temple
the Lockridge situation is my own creation, later disclaimers should be clearer on that.
The rest of Gen Lost can be found Here

PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:22 pm
by TerraBull
Nice story, worth the re-reading.

PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:31 pm
by Fafhrd
The rewrite did clear up some continuity errors and make for a better read over all. Is there a new chapter coming at the end of the rewrites?

PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 7:53 pm
by Sunshine Temple
Fafhrd wrote:The rewrite did clear up some continuity errors and make for a better read over all. Is there a new chapter coming at the end of the rewrites?

Hopefully. Ch10 is being writen.
And that would be nice.