pure ranma fic: Fist of the True White Swan

[Reika]

this is a fic idea for mousse lovers (which I'm not but that's beside the point ^^)

the story could start pretty "fanfic canon" meaning a mousse bashing by shampoo, but either something will go really wrong, or it'll be the drop too much (any reason usually used for a massive character change for ranma centred fics will work anyway)

mousse then start an introspective time, he then choose to "rebuild" himself to finally prove his love to shampoo. the hardest part for him being : to be accepted as an anything goes student and learning from ranma, putting his fealings for ranma to the side, stopping using his hidden weapons style.

at some time, I think he should get his eyes corrected some so he can have better glasses and really see clearly with then, if not completly and not needing and help to see clearly.

the title : fist of the true white swan, should be a reminder of his old 'attack with a training poty duck shaped' and be the name of his own ki attack (moko takabisha/shishi hokodan life, but fuelled with his love for shampoo of course and would be of a white color)

fic could end with him challenging shampoo for her hand as remplacement of ranma as her airen (author should decide if the fic end there or detail the fight and the aftermath...)

anyone interesed ? :p

[Spokavriel]

Allot of ideas for Moose but in this one I don't really see enough for a story idea yet.

Sure you plotted out some ways for the character to go and grow but I'm having trouble imagining a plot out of it.

What motivation is there for Moose to try anything different? It's not like he ever considered it before.

[Reika]

you know, when some author get an idea running in his head, he has to write it to get it out... this idea made too much travel through my brain already so I'm posting the little I have to "get it out" so to speak, of course I didn't plan it as much as I did my others stories.

What motivation is there for Moose to try anything different? It's not like he ever considered it before.

well, it's not like everything he tried in canon worked at all, so why not try something different ?

yeah, it's a fic based mostly on character development and changes for the better, all centered on mousse but his changing can cause most of the others chars to take exemple on him and start to grow up some more too...

dunno if someone will really want this story idea or not, but it was worth a try to post it here, not that it took me too much time to write the post