Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

by **Atlan** » Sun Apr 16, 2006 7:34 pm

Sadly, i lack both the sailor moon knowloge and the wrting skills to write this one, but it seems like a good idea to me:
Hotaru is a quiet, shy, weak (phicisically) girl. And she has magical healing powers. So why is she the senshi of destruction, capeable of mudering a planet?
What if the origional senshi of saturn was a red-head named ranma, chosen for her honour, bravery, martial arts skills, and lack of desire to use those skills for evil?
After ruling saturn alone for years, queen serenity and her advisors Artimis and Luna decide to play matchmaker, and hook the the poor, lonley ruler up with a nice man. After several balls, all designed to introudce ranma to a nice man, she only ends up showing intrest in one person- a maid at the ball named Akane. After the queen realizes that yet another outer senshi is intrested in the fairer sex, she aranges for one of the moons of saturn to host the next wommen-only martial arts compitetion. In the competion, Akane, Shampoo and Ukyo all compete, as does ranma, under the name ranko to go incogniteo. After winning the torunument, ranma gets healed buy the medic Hotaru.
Akane spills the beans on who ranma realy is, and she invites all the girls to stay at her castle for a week, due to having a crush on them all. Eventually, they all fall in love with ranma, and knowing how lonley she is, they decide to share her.
When they all marry ranma, he makes them senshi of saturns moons-
Akane= Sailor Titan
Shampoo= Sailor Prometheus
Ukyo= Sailor Tarvos
Hotaru= Sailor Pandora
And as ranma gives them some of her power, she has the power to give them, temporerorly, the power of saturn. But they lack all fine controll, and it weakens them as long as they hold the mantale of saturn.
All of them have a talismin. Ranma uses a pole arm, shampoo has twin bonbori, ukyo has her spatulacher, Akane a mallet, and hotaru a staff (think yuna in final Fantasy 10). Hotaru is pitiful, ofensivly, but a rival for the queen in the healing departmant, and acts the part of the medic for the outer senshi. She looks up to Neptune and Uranus as pearants, as hers abandoned her for being a lesbian, while Neptune and Uranus dont mind (since they are too).
When beryl atacked, she had the palace on saturn bombed, before any other moves were taken, killing the saturn sailors (except Hotaru, who was on a trip to the moon, since she was the only saturn sailor to want to go the ball).
Hotaru feels the mantle of saturn fall on her, realizes her wives are dead. Beryl atacks, and hotaru lacks the fine controll to destroy the invasion without destroyong the moon as well. When everything is lost, serinity sends everyone forawd- except Ranma, Ukyo, Shampoo and Akane, as they died to early before hand.
Modern Day:
Satsuna knows this, but dosent tell hotaru, as she dosent want to make her sad for her lost love, knowing that they are lost forever.
What setsuna dosnt know, is that hotaru's link to ranma brought her foward, and ranma's link to all her seshi brought them foward too. The reason for this is that when they died, ranma was trying something differernt in the bedroom with her wives- a way to turn into a guy temporeraly. As she died like this, she was sent foward like this, so setsuna didn't pick up on her energy.
The other reason i cant write this one is i cant think of where to take it, or how to have ranma and hotaru meet, but it seemed like to good an idea to let it die without someone having a chance to do it.

by **Dragon Man** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 3:33 am

If I knew more about Sailor Moon and wasn't busy with my Naruto fic and college I'd jump on the chance to write this story. Your idea is great, and if you keep getting ideas maybe we can hash out a rough story. I do like the idea of Ranma being the true Saturn, plus it would be cool to see Team Saturn go after Happosai for all the grief he's caused them in Nerima.
When would this take place in the Ranmaverse?

by **Nexus** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 11:17 pm

This is an interesting idea but I'm not particularly fond of harem type stories at the moment.

by **Atlan** » Wed Apr 19, 2006 2:40 am

well, after safron is a bit over done, as is right after the battle with herb (with the normal senshi plot twist of ranma staying locked. Perhaps in the middle of the engagement ring incident- the one which turns out to be a pill box?
That way ranma knows all his moves, dosent have to worry (as much) about mom's katana, and he hasnt declared his love yet, so everyone's on an even footing. And he isnt so blatently over powered.
Heh, i can just imagine hotaru walking past ranma's mom's house, seeing the girls destroying the place, and getting jelous of her co-wives for no reason that she can remember, with the other outers haveing to drag her away before she whips out "Mr Sharples" (the silence glave, cant remember who thought of that one sadly, he deserves respect for that name).

by **Dragon Man** » Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:24 am

Atlan wrote:well, after safron is a bit over done, as is right after the battle with herb (with the normal senshi plot twist of ranma staying locked. Perhaps in the middle of the engagement ring incident- the one which turns out to be a pill box?
That way ranma knows all his moves, dosent have to worry (as much) about mom's katana, and he hasnt declared his love yet, so everyone's on an even footing. And he isnt so blatently over powered.
Heh, i can just imagine hotaru walking past ranma's mom's house, seeing the girls destroying the place, and getting jelous of her co-wives for no reason that she can remember, with the other outers haveing to drag her away before she whips out "Mr Sharples" (the silence glave, cant remember who thought of that one sadly, he deserves respect for that name).

I can picture the NWC girls and Ranma crumpled on the ground with bumps on thier heads after Saturn smacks them with the flat of the Glaive before yelling at them for fighting. As she was the healer of the group I have a feeling she was the voice of reason to them.

by **Atlan** » Thu Apr 20, 2006 2:43 am

well someone would have to be, or they would all go as mad as kodachi.
Hmmm, Kodachi........ The royal dominatrix? Just a friend to ranma and the girls, but madly in love with hotaru, and hated ranma for stealing her, hence her desire to kill the pigtaled girl? No, it's a bit too much, isnt it?
Beryl's dominatrix? Hmm, madness atracts madness.......
Argh! Dtupid thoughts! Get out of my head!

by **Dragon Man** » Sat Apr 22, 2006 1:46 am

Or Kodachi was not chosen to be part of Saturn's team, so she joined Beryl and nuked the team while Hotaru was at the moon in revenge! Maybe Hotaru hunted her down and killed her before whiping out the remains of the moon kingdom?

by **Atlan** » Sat Apr 22, 2006 2:17 am

Maybe Hotaru hunted her down and killed her before whiping out the remains of the moon kingdom?

Wiping or Whipping? :shock:

Come to think of it, Bery and Kodaci have a lot in commen. Ever wonder if they might be related?

by **Dragon Man** » Sat Apr 22, 2006 2:33 am

Wiping, my bad. :oops:

They do seem alot alike... both after a guy pledged to another girl..... I can easily see Kodachi being Beryl's desendant.

by **Atlan** » Sat Apr 22, 2006 3:50 am

why stop there- twin sister.
Ahh, I can see it now. Three siblings, nobles, bound to madness. One, a swordsman, always trying to beat on king endymoon for stealing his sister and his "meatball headed goddess". Beryl, a politicion, strugeling valiantly to make the "Noble house of Terra" superior over the moon kingdom, whilst lusting over her cousin Endymoon. And her twin sister, the Black Rose of Terra, wanting to be a senshi, to "punish in the name of love and justice- in her black leather, with her whip- whilst persuing her "firefly-sama", and hating the "pigtaled enemy of all who live", for stealing her love intrest.

by **Dragon Man** » Sat Apr 22, 2006 4:09 am

Atlan wrote:why stop there- twin sister.
Ahh, I can see it now. Three siblings, nobles, bound to madness. One, a swordsman, always trying to beat on king endymoon for stealing his sister and his "meatball headed goddess". Beryl, a politicion, strugeling valiantly to make the "Noble house of Terra" superior over the moon kingdom, whilst lusting over her cousin Endymoon. And her twin sister, the Black Rose of Terra, wanting to be a senshi, to "punish in the name of love and justice- in her black leather, with her whip- whilst persuing her "firefly-sama", and hating the "pigtaled enemy of all who live", for stealing her love intrest.

Man, you are good, I can actually feel the image forming in my head as I read that! So Kuno lusts for Ranko, Kodachi for Hotaru.... so the Saturn Sailors just have to get them to one another in defense of their respective loves and they'll be so busy fighting the Saturn Senshi can power up the really really big blast that will get rid of them for a few weeks.

by **Atlan** » Sat Apr 22, 2006 4:20 am

yeah- the Kunos (including beryl) all come to saturn to kill and marry various girls. Ranma doing a nice, huge hit on them, using the power of saturn, and they fly all the way through space, back to terra. The real reason for beryl destroying the moon kingdom- "that harlot from saturn marred (not a typo, I mean disfigured, not married) my beautiful face, and now my Endymoon-poo wont come and ravish me anymore (ignoring the fact he loaths her, always avoided her, and never ravished her before). Ill show her whos the most destructive!"

by **Dragon Man** » Sat Apr 22, 2006 5:43 am

Atlan wrote:yeah- the Kunos (including beryl) all come to saturn to kill and marry various girls. Ranma doing a nice, huge hit on them, using the power of saturn, and they fly all the way through space, back to terra. The real reason for beryl destroying the moon kingdom- "that harlot from saturn marred (not a typo, I mean disfigured, not married) my beautiful face, and now my Endymoon-poo wont come and ravish me anymore (ignoring the fact he loaths her, always avoided her, and never ravished her before). Ill show her whos the most destructive!"

Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! If she thought Ranma was destructive in the past, just wait until she sees the collateral damage from the Hiryuu Shouten Han, Bakusai Tenketso, Shishi Hokodan, and Neko-Ranma using everything as a scratching post. Then combine that with the power of Saturn!!!
And to get rid of her base: Drop Ranma and Ryouga in there and let them duke it out, the base will be totaled!

by **Atlan** » Sun Apr 23, 2006 12:09 am

Imagine the modern day meeting- a monster tearing the city up. Kodachi is there. She remembers her past, partially, and accepts her destiny- "Terra Dominatix Power- Make Up!" (insert naked twirly light show here, with kodachi in a leather dominatrix suit, whirling her whip) "Halt, foul beast! Sailor suited girls are for obeying their misterisses, not for killing. Now, in the name of love and justice, I will punish you! You will know who is the true misteress!"
Two hours later:
"Please let me die!"
"Ohohohohohohohohh! You havent earned the right to speak, slave!"

by **Dragon Man** » Sun Apr 23, 2006 5:02 pm

Atlan wrote:Imagine the modern day meeting- a monster tearing the city up. Kodachi is there. She remembers her past, partially, and accepts her destiny- "Terra Dominatix Power- Make Up!" (insert naked twirly light show here, with kodachi in a leather dominatrix suit, whirling her whip) "Halt, foul beast! Sailor suited girls are for obeying their misterisses, not for killing. Now, in the name of love and justice, I will punish you! You will know who is the true misteress!"
Two hours later:
"Please let me die!"
"Ohohohohohohohohh! You havent earned the right to speak, slave!"

What if she turned Mr. Green Turtle into a Youma?

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