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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:05 pm

crystlshake wrote:Personally id go with 'inteligence' being a learned trait. Unless the author wants the spring to carry some memories with it. Anouther contributing factor to this would be the average life expectancy of the race. If they have a similar to human lifespan, they could achieve their technology as inherited and their knowledge of how to use/make it as taught. However it could be suggested that the race as a whole exibits inquisitive tendencies. In addition the resonated signiature of a Mercutian(ami) could be explained as the same 'mana seepage' that caused the change in the kitsune (a side effect of living on the planet/being tied to it), and is somehting that he is picking up with his altered sences as a kitsune until he can actually smell or see her.
The 'tech head' ranma angle would also be kind of cool. Plus it would be easy to bring in at a latter than initial point. Give him (and the reader) some time to adjust to these changes, before his fascination with technology becomes apparent. It could also be tied to advanced technology, as the mundane things are relatively primitave, and things like the Mercury computer may have a magical signiature of its own to incite his interest. Maybe a 'mystical tech' or artificer angle.
This in turn could be used as an embelishment to Ranma's learning curve/style of thinking after he is cursed (like a +1 intelect racial bonus). Since tact would be tied to wisdom, he sadly wouldnt see any bonus to his negotiation skill(unless he got it from charisma). At least the bonus dexterity should give him a high enough dodge bonus to get out of the worst of it...(though his strength may have taken a hit when he changed making him somwhat weaker physically (comparitively)).

Didn't think of this earlier, but Ranma has been away from most of civilization for a while while in China, so maybe she first of all starts dismantling things like the TV remote, the phone, the vaccum, cars, etc. to get a grasp of modern technology before going for the Silver Millenium level stuff. After all, she has to be able to disguise the advanced stuff so it's not obvious and reveals Amy is Mercury.
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Postby Dark Magic » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:11 pm

Well the spring does change Ranma a little bit. If I remember right in an earlier post the spring has Ranma doing Kitsune like things and the such.
Also I love the idea of an extremely smart Ranma. Since Ranma can't really go to school because of what she is. While Amy is away Ranma can play with all the little machine's in Amy's house.
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:14 pm

Dark Magic wrote:Well the spring does change Ranma a little bit. If I remember right in an earlier post the spring has Ranma doing Kitsune like things and the such.
Also I love the idea of an extremely smart Ranma. Since Ranma can't really go to school because of what she is. While Amy is away Ranma can play with all the little machine's in Amy's house.

I can see this happening: Amy comes home to find machines doing all the work while Ranma is busy building something out of the remains of something. When asked what she is doing, Ranma absentmindedly says, "I'm converting the heater to a cold fusion generator to save money and provide better power. Pass me the crescent wrench, would you?" Next thing she hears is Amy hitting the floor in a dead faint.
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Postby Dark Magic » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:21 pm

Amy would probably be estatic to talk to some on the same intelligical plane as her. I can see them both working on a new invention already.
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:24 pm

True, but I think the shock of how much Ranma had acomplished while she was away would cause Amy to faint.
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Postby Dark Magic » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:32 pm

Yeah I know what you meant. I meant after she woke up from her early nap.
How long do you think it would take the scouts to trust someone who is a Kitsune. I mean didn't it take along time for some of them to even trust other scouts when they first showed up.
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:36 pm

Dark Magic wrote:Yeah I know what you meant. I meant after she woke up from her early nap.
How long do you think it would take the scouts to trust someone who is a Kitsune. I mean didn't it take along time for some of them to even trust other scouts when they first showed up.

Usagi trusts anyone in a fuku. Amy would probably be more worried about Ranma climbing into her bed each night, but seeing her condition during their first meeting I doubt she'd hate Ranma or distrust her for long. I don't think Rei and Ranma would grow very close easily since Rei is a spiritual person, which Ranma is weak against. Makoto... would probably come around after Ranma started sparring with her. Minako.... not sure there. The Outers would probably be at the top of Ranma's kill list for wanting to kill off Hotaru.
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Postby Dark Magic » Tue Apr 25, 2006 3:42 pm

The Outers seem to have a shoot first ask questions later mentality. So they would probably try to kill or at least hurt Ranma at first. Also is Ranma in a fuku in this fic cause I didn't think she was.
Wouldn't Pluto already know what Ranma was.
I would love to see the scene were Amy keeps kicking Ranma out of her bed and Ranma trying to get back in all sneaky. A little fox dressed like a spy. :D
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 4:17 pm

Dark Magic wrote:The Outers seem to have a shoot first ask questions later mentality. So they would probably try to kill or at least hurt Ranma at first. Also is Ranma in a fuku in this fic cause I didn't think she was.
Wouldn't Pluto already know what Ranma was.
I would love to see the scene were Amy keeps kicking Ranma out of her bed and Ranma trying to get back in all sneaky. A little fox dressed like a spy. :D

Saturn is the exception to the Outer's policy. I don't think Ranma is in a fuku... Would that be happening Nukem or will Ranma stay the magical creature in this fic? Setsuna.... I have no clue about, but I would love to see Ranma prank her. If Amy keeps kicking Ranma out I bet she'd get really upset, possibly start sobbing, and cause Amy to have pity on her.
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Postby Dark Magic » Tue Apr 25, 2006 4:34 pm

Dragon Man wrote:If Amy keeps kicking Ranma out I bet she'd get really upset, possibly start sobbing, and cause Amy to have pity on her.

HA finally Ranma gets to use the dreaded puppy dog look attack.
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 7:49 pm

Dark Magic wrote:
Dragon Man wrote:If Amy keeps kicking Ranma out I bet she'd get really upset, possibly start sobbing, and cause Amy to have pity on her.

HA finally Ranma gets to use the dreaded puppy dog look attack.

And if she teaches it to baby Hotaru...
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Postby Dark Magic » Tue Apr 25, 2006 10:02 pm

Dragon Man wrote: And if she teaches it to baby Hotaru...

That would be the most deadly attack that Saturn would ever be able to do. Who cares about blowing up the world when she could do that.
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 10:13 pm

Dark Magic wrote:
Dragon Man wrote: And if she teaches it to baby Hotaru...

That would be the most deadly attack that Saturn would ever be able to do. Who cares about blowing up the world when she could do that.

Youma would turn into her devoted followers after one look and set about repairing any damage they caused! Then they'd march on the new villain's base and whipe it out!
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Postby Dark Magic » Tue Apr 25, 2006 10:28 pm

Then the world is at peace with humans getting along with youma. All because of Hotaru.
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue Apr 25, 2006 10:30 pm

Dark Magic wrote:Then the world is at peace with humans getting along with youma. All because of Hotaru.

And when she crys at whatever caused the Great Freeze it feels ashamed of itself and commits suicide, thus saving the world and having Hotaru declared Queen of the world! Bye bye Crystal Tokyo! Of course, Chibi-Usa is still born, but she's a normal kid and not a princess.
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