Ranma vs the senshi + Japan

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Ranma vs the senshi + Japan

Postby ranma201 » Sun Apr 19, 2009 1:09 pm

Hi, I was thinking about writing a fanfic (my first). The fic would be about Ranma vs the senshi. However this will play out in the public arena. What I mean by this is that someone video tapes a couple of the senshis attacking Ranma (because he destorys their future) after he defeats a monster then airs it. Pluto steps in and tell the press that Ranma is some sort of demon or made a deal with a demon. Everyone in Japan is now against Ranma except for the people of Nermia. Now Ranma with support of Nermia (crew + town) must fight back. They must restore Ranma's "good" name and get their revenge on the senshi.
Tell me what you guys think.
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Postby Spokavriel » Sun Apr 19, 2009 1:19 pm

The concept is still a bit content light for what is recommended to be posted in the Ideas board. What does Pluto do to prove that Ranma is aligned with dark forces? What do the other Senshi think? Does Ranma know any of the Senshi in their civilian forms? You have an idea that I can't say I haven't seen before so what more are you going to include to make it unique?
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Postby ranma201 » Sun Apr 19, 2009 3:28 pm

Well, I have a basic outline.

Starts off right after the fail wedding.
Ranma decides to take control of his life + get stronger to prepare for people like Saffron.
Nodoka's house in Juuban is rebuilt, so Ranma moves back there.
Ranma defeats a youma, scouts (inners only) arrive just to see a glowing Ranma. So they are worry that he moght be the youma.
Ranma, being Ranma, just pisses them off instead of answering their questions and leaves.
Later Pluto, later tell them that chance of crystal Tokyo is now only 60% and it is due to whatever happened in the park. And she couldn't see the events at the park (magic of curses block her from seeing).
Some of the inners are sure that Ranma must be a new enemy now.
Neptune + Uranus just care that Ranma destroyed their future.
Then one day Ranma and his mom are out shopping, they hear a monster, so Ranma goes and beat it. When Ranma goes back to his mom, Neptune + Uranus show up and fire their attack. Ranma just trys to block both (need to protect Nodoka).
Nodoka is badly hurt.
The attack on Ranma was caught on tape (including the fact that Ranma glows) and broadcast.
Ranma gets Akane mad and she makes a stupid comment to the press about Ranma being a demon.
Pluto then tells the press that Ranma signed a contract with a demon to get their power and is trying to take over the world.
Everyone in Japan wants to hunt Ranma down, except for the people in Nermia.
I am either going to make it a Juuban vs Nermia thing or Japan vs Nermia.
Ranma has no idea who the senshis are, just knows that they have ruin his honor and nearly killed his mother. He must clear his name. In trying to clear his name, he discover their real identity and their plan to take over the world (sort of speak).
He informs the press of the senshi identity and their plan. Some people believe him, some don't. But now their identity is out, chance of crystal toyko is 0.
During all of this, the senshi try to kill him and his family (and friends).
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Postby Spokavriel » Sun Apr 19, 2009 3:45 pm

Kuno's Foul Sorcerer rant might fit better than Akane calling Ranma a Demon. Now Akane using all the terms that fit for Happosai on the other hand....

Don't forget there's some territory between Minato/Jubaan and Nerima. With allot of prominent commerce areas in between.

They only attacked his honor I don't see anything to ruin it yet.

Genma has done more to Ruin Honor over his entire life. But something that might be fun would be to have the News discover all the Bar Tabs in the name of Ranma Saotome over the last 10-12 years. Talk about a shot to his credibility and him still clearly being only now a highschool kid when he supposedly was drinking for the last Decade. Jubaan Press could come to the assumption of that supporting the Demon Contract idea.
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Postby ranma201 » Sun Apr 19, 2009 4:19 pm

The bar tab thing sound like a good idea, also have a few of them showing up to get their money. I probably add how he has some 50 fiancees (showing how he will sign any contract to get power). And of course have the press suggest that one of the fiancees is actually a demon.

The press will also find out about the curses and say something like how the curses are part of the demon contract.
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Postby Spokavriel » Sun Apr 19, 2009 4:45 pm

Well if the press buys the Dark Sorcerer line from Kuno then they could claim the Sorcerer made the Curses.
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