Spokavriel wrote: I never intended for this to be a case of Ranma having no agency. I mean that would be like OOhh Ranma's our narator. Lets see how much we can have him mangle the gods eye commentary. What? No Ranma has to be able to interact with Usagi and what part of the possibility of Ranma going back to Nerima to see what has happened makes it seem like I thought Ranma would have no control and be only an observer in attempting something like that? Sending Usagi there would be potential murder.
frice2000 wrote:True if the whole story revolves around spirits. This did not seem to since as summarized it seems the main points of conflict would be Usagi's and Ranma was simply a passenger. That he gained a body back so he could actually be an agent in his own destiny makes that development worthwhile again. The stories you refer to that have a spirit only as an observer who has no agency in anything really don't interest me.
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