Hong Ranma

[Kadunta]

On deviantArt.

Temporarily working direct link (probably gone next week):


A very quick sketch, a very quick colouring.

[Spokavriel]

Nice image but it looks like her eyes are glazed. Shouldn't she have some pupils?

[Kadunta]

Looks like I've been drawing all my characters without black pupils for years now.

I gave her black pupils. She looks... weird in my opinion, but maybe I've just grown accustomed to drawing 'Hyuugas'.

[Spokavriel]

The pupils are a bit large... What about drawing smaller black pupils inside the light pupil you had before?

[Kadunta]

that's the way I changed it first. And I definitely didn't like it. I suppose I'll have to add some more reflections to the eye to make it look better.

[Spokavriel]

The images are going in the right direction. But yeah some reflections might help. The big black pupils were so empty it was like looking into a cave.

[Crescent Pulsar R]

I just recently had a story idea where Hong Meiling was Ranma's mother. ;p

As for the eyes: have you tried dark blue pupils? You could also make the whole eye dark blue and add a bit of the current blue near the rim, where you think the light would be reflected.

I don't know what to make of the lips...

[Kadunta]

I tried adding some more white on her eyes, but that didn't do much good. I also did a simple all-black eye version.


I suppose I should start drawing big eyes that have pupils and different kinds of mouths then.

[Spokavriel]

I like the more white one. The all black reminds me of something from the movie Krull.