Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

Ok.

This is likely the wrong part of the forum (plz move as needed), I'm doing this on something of an urge and lack of sleep.

Here goes though

Was flicking through my e-mails when I saw a FF.net alert. Clicked a link, then some reviews. Then ended up here and saw the Dead pile. Something just didn't feel right at that, I promised myself when I first started writing FF that I wouldn't let a story die without finishing it.

If anyones still interested in reading it, I'm going to restart writing Shadow Veiled Senshi.

* Considers likelyhood of this and becomes depressed *

The problem is that I will need a Beta since I'm a little rusty and can use a kick in the butt to get me moving sometimes.

Any takers?

could you give a link to this fic?

It's in the dead file of this site.

Otherwise see here-
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/471307/

Just finished reading the fic and I like it. I wouldn't mind to read more. So what if there are some clichés. There are some interesting ideas in later chapters that haven't been overused. Here are some serious mistakes I found:

Metallicas => Metallia's
Ginjaika => there are two weapons: Kinjakan (fire) and Gekkaja (ice)
Queen Sincerity => Serenity
Moose => Mousse

Could you also continue with 'Revenge Rebirth'? That fic is really original I think and has a lot of untapped potential (it would be nice if Ryoga didn't know that Ranma has been reborn as Ukyo).

Yes, you defiantly need a beta reader or three, but you have some good ideas there. I don't think anyone has done a Pluto who is quite that extreme without actually being insane. Ranmas natural protective instinct clashing with her really should be a good read. I suck at beta reading, but I'll be glad to keep some Author Pitchforks sharpened for when you need some "motivation".

While I cannot in good conscience offer my talents as a beta, I am looking forward to "Shadow Veiled Senshi", either another chapter or a rewrite. Any inkling on when the next chapter will be out?

I've put up an update list on my FF.net forum.

It'll probably be the only thing I use it for but it's useful.



Thanks for the encouragement, it's very much needed and appreciated.

Special thanks to Dumbledork for the pointers. Points 1 and 4 were spelling mistakes I didn't realise I did and point 2 I missed completely, big thanks on that.

Point 3 wasn't a mistake, where did I say that Queen Sincerity in that chapter was Usagi mother .