Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Spokavriel » Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:11 pm

Why doesn't Ranma-chan just form an alliance with her passengers? All of them know that the Taint is wrong. So why not ally with each other with the goal being to clean the taint so long as the world is not destroyed in the process. Meaning animals and humans not born of the 12 tail's machinations all are cleaned where possible instead of killed.
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby WG_Writer » Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:58 pm

Spokavriel wrote: 12 tail's machinations


Don't you mean 10 tails?
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Spokavriel » Thu Jul 17, 2014 9:15 pm

I mean the one that defeated the 4 that fled the world. The one to taint the world and make Chakrah possible.
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Vahn » Thu Jul 17, 2014 9:39 pm

Spokavriel wrote: Why doesn't Ranma-chan just form an alliance with her passengers? All of them know that the Taint is wrong. So why not ally with each other with the goal being to clean the taint so long as the world is not destroyed in the process. Meaning animals and humans not born of the 12 tail's machinations all are cleaned where possible instead of killed.


Because at this point in the story ten tails are gone only the Chakra children are left. There is nothing for them to ally again also like in the previous chapter, like herb said, they never said they were good. they want to rule.
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Spokavriel » Thu Jul 17, 2014 10:06 pm

Who said they had to be good? It would be an agreement to the passengers ends. And probably get the playing field cleared somewhat. After all Ranma is still mortal, compared to them and they will get their chance sooner in their respective perspectives than later.
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Vahn » Thu Jul 17, 2014 10:21 pm

Wait are you asking why they are not allying with Ranma to kill everyone who has chakra which is everyone?
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Spokavriel » Thu Jul 17, 2014 10:31 pm

I'm asking why they aren't at least appearing to consider a deal that would eliminate some of the power players in this world that might be problems for them later like the tailed beasts that Ranma has almost certainly heard of. You know before the history lesson from Herb-chan.

edit: Forgot to ask. Is Ranma going to tell Tsunade about the Kaiju and their plans to get her to birth them into the world and that whole thing being the reason for keeping her female instead of able to change like she use to?
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Vahn » Thu Jul 17, 2014 10:40 pm

Not sure how much you know of Naruto, but the tailed beast are passed out to powerful villages as WMD as I understand it. They are all in people like Naruto, some get treated like shit some get elevated to awesome status (Killer B, Fuu) . So they tailed beast aren't just roaming around they are protected by powerful ninja clans that have enslaved said tailed beasts. Also, Suzaku and Seiryuu is only familiar with the Ten Tailed, tailed 1-9 never existed for them as that came later which of course wouldn't stop them but there is no central focus and the only way to get rid of Chakra is to kill the person as everyone has chakra in them on that world thanks to Kaguya, you are simply born with it strong or weak everyone has it hence the reason why Tsunade was surprise Ranma had none yet was walking and talking like normal.

Even Rock Lee though pants and Ninjutus and Gen still has chakra to fight with.


I think I am going off on a tangent there, anyway, the power players belong to rival villages of Konoha power level and are sealed into people like Naruto. Who they are I believe is kept secret, at least I think so, anyone can correct me on that?
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Spokavriel » Thu Jul 17, 2014 10:46 pm

While the carriers for the beasts are suppose to be state secrets the existence of them in the world is more well known. I did an edit in the prior post since I didn't see a reply yet.
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Vahn » Thu Jul 17, 2014 11:00 pm

Oh . I think I get it the beast themselves, I don't think that they are aware that the 1-9 tailed beast is actually that SAME 10 tail beast. Sure they are called tailed beast but the ten tailed they fought was under specific control of Kagugya while the supposed tailed beast out int he world now have been imprisoned.There is nothing to say that they are the same or even part of Kaguya forces and with any history lesson that Ranma might deign to pay attention to, Kaguya does not even rule anymore.

Then of course there is Ranma herself (himself in the mindscape) Thinking from Ranma perspective why would Ranma want to ally with them to kill these beast that's taken care of? To Ranma chakra could be use for good or bad and is no different then ki in terms of who wields it. So in my opinion there really is no point in her trying to erase something that has been a part of everybody lives for over a thousand years. Ranma is not a hero , just a squirrel in the world trying to get by, doesn't even have any real loyalty toward anyone but Tsunade and Shizune. Live and let live, there is no major bad guy that Ranma is aware of at the moment , at least not yet that has gotten on Ranma radar.

Not Akatsuki, not Ochimaru, worse Ranma ever done and i'd show this in a flash back , is kill bandits and missing nin's which she is well aware of that done people wrong.

As for Tsunade and telling well, I don't mind spoiling since people don't read or reply in the fuku boards much anyway. Yep and Tsunade will quickly examine Ranma and call bullshit. ^_^ A lot of people are going off the assumption that the sealing arts is exactly like Naruto seals or similar enough but fail to remember that every other jinichuriki out there is sealed a different way. Even gara seal was different and sloppy from what I read, but Ranma's seal heh heh heh heh. Ahem. Yeah. :D That's gonna be under the hat for a while BUT again the hint to that answer is all throughout the first five chapter.

When I revealed it and people go back to read it , it would be like "Oh yeah! why did I miss that!"
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Spokavriel » Thu Jul 17, 2014 11:09 pm

You mean the fact a Ki Seal is built of a beings spirit. Or the fact it has no elements visible to Chakrah users? At least not unless they are uncommonly skilled at the Ki side of things?
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Vahn » Thu Jul 17, 2014 11:21 pm

Now that my friend would be something I'll also keep under the hat until it's revealed...soonish as in chapter wise. Real time wise if I could find a good manga source of Naruto to read from, I have a sequence of event in mind but i need it to mess well with a key event in Naruto that I don't quite remember the details too. So until I finish with anime and get it, then I can't wrote it and give do it justice. I know people say manga panda or other but my internet protect program keep blocking shit form those website that tried to download itself onto my system. ><
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Spokavriel » Thu Jul 17, 2014 11:39 pm

This kind of situation is why I miss reliable Torrent sites and the ability to DL entire archives of fan scanlations.
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby Vahn » Fri Jul 18, 2014 12:08 am

Me too :)
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Re: Fake Uzu [Ranma/Naruto] Definate series SPOILER

Postby WG_Writer » Fri Jul 18, 2014 12:20 am

If I need to reference the Manga I go to http://www.mangasee.com/manga/?series=Naruto *cough* I am sure we all already have copies of the original manga and use this for ease of use only....
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