Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

Hey everyone it's been a while, sorry I haven't posted anything recently but I've been a little busy. Anyway, if you go back a bit, you may recall that I posted the prologue to Kid's Trip to CarnEvil. Well I managed to finish it and would love to hear some feedback on it. For those who don't know, it's a Soul Eater/CarnEvil crossover fic.

You can read it here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9694445/1/Kid-s-Trip-to-CarnEvil

For those who don't know what CarnEvil is, just watch this video (it's only 26 minutes long): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DT9OdJ5snoQ