Fuku Fic Idea Up for Adoption

[MovieBrat]

Well I'm back and I have a story idea but I decided to give it up to someone who could do a better job than I can. Though I'm not sure if this is the right section to submit it but I'm hoping someone will pick it up.

But I'll describe the concept in one word: Mondas.

[PCHeintz72]

Well I'm back and I have a story idea but I decided to give it up to someone who could do a better job than I can. Though I'm not sure if this is the right section to submit it but I'm hoping someone will pick it up.

But I'll describe the concept in one word: Mondas.

I do not know offhand what that is... while I could look it up. I'm not sure I should.

I'm not a moderator, but I think the ideas thread requires it be a ful concept, as descriptive as possible, and several paragraphs long at a minimum.

[MovieBrat]

Sorry about that. But basically the idea is this.

In a past life, Ranma was Serena born on Mondas, the twin planet of Earth. She was basically just a normal girl who endured the harsh cold on the planet as it drifted away from Earth's orbit. She was among the first to become, you guessed it, a Cyberman. That's right, the Doctor Who universe is involved in this concept, the Cybermen in particular. She was only partially converted so she only managed to escape but not before much of her body parts such as her arms and legs were no longer organic, at least partially non-organic (I'm going by their appearence in the Tenth Planet and Spare Parts). She escaped the planet on a military ship and managed to crash land on the moon due to exhaustion.

She was rescued by the Senshi and placed on life support but begged Queen Serenity to kill her considering what's currently happening on Mondas. She wasn't sure but Serena did herself in the end jumping off from the palace.

Cue to the present day, Ranma has been getting dreams of her past life to the point where her past self is angrily begging him to free him because she's his memory.

During all of this however, the Sailor Senshi are enjoying their peace after the defeat of Galaxia but unknown to them a series of youma attacks (a combination of monsters from their previous encounters) and Rei and Hotaru have been having nightmares of what seemed to be humanoid shaped figures but made of metal. Surprise, surprise, it turns out that the Cybermen have been watching them and informed by their Cybermats, they sent out various monsters to keep them off track trying to get them to believe there's something else going on. But it doesn't matter as Ranma gets a new set of "dreams" via visits from the spirit of Queen Serenity who warns him of the incoming invasion of Earth.

Fast forward after a series of Ranma getting involved in the youma attacks, him, Akane and the Senshi are finally caught by the Cybermen and are taken to Telos for conversion. And this time, they checked for any remaining Cryons (and killed them too). In one last dream though, Serenity gives him the henshin wand and communicator basically telling him that the Senshi will need his help and repent for the Mondasians destructive executions for survival but he has a choice, he can choose to go with it or not but warsn him to think about the consequences about both options first. After waking up (and escaping), he buries the wand throwing it away but is knocked out by a Cyberman via a stun gun. He has a vision of himself being converted and like before, he escaped but not before gunning down Akane and Sailor Moon in a violent rage.

After waking up, Ranma reverses his decision and decides to take the wand and transforms into Sailor Mondas.

That's all I could think of feel free to improve on it for anyone who wants to take it.

[Pale Wolf]

Heintz is correct about 'some description being required'. No need to jump on it since you have provided such a description, but in the future, make that your first post

[MovieBrat]

I promise, once again I apologise. But like I said, that's the premise. I haven't exactly thought it through and some of it is from a story I thought of but like I said feel free to improve on it with my only suggestion is to make it dark because I thought of the idea as to how to make a dark fuku fic that's really fubar as well as how dark it can get but obviously there has to be some funny moments for the reader to have a breather of sorts. And the idea of a Senshi coming from Mondas of all planets would probably be the worst thing to happen to someone like Ranma. He's simply lucky his past life wasn't in Skaro but then again given his choatic life, his past life being in Skaro would make sense.

[ckosacranoid]

it could be worse....he could be sailor dalok....extermite power make up!!!!!

oh..my god the thought of a dalok dressed in a fuku......with red hair no less...

[MovieBrat]

I did think of a sequel where Akane would be Sailor Skaro and her past life is basically being the daughter of a mother Thal and a Kaled father. And yes, said sequel would involve the Daleks being the antagonists.