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Minkei

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2015 7:37 pm
by toushin

Re: Minkei

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2015 9:33 pm
by WG_Writer
Two big things wrong with this and one minor problem. (the actual outline-ish thing is in need of clarifying what its about earlier.)

First - the amount of forethought in the link makes this more an outline then an actual idea. An idea is more something a paragraph would cover. This would be about three solid pages of full fleshed out idea.

Second - This is only has a link. Better then this is expected.

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Finally. while normally I would flag an admin to move this I think as its only a link it could be recreated properly in outline and scenes section with an actual description in at least one paragraph with the link for more information.