by talonhunter » Sat May 16, 2009 10:14 am
Good point Spoke...Well I found this over on the Fanfiction.net site, looking for something else and discovdered a recent change in the way stories could be accessed,(as in direct access to crosseovers now)
This story is written from a 1st person standpoint, almost in a diary type format. It starts off giving some background detail about the characters in a way that IS a little flat, but it then goes into the SM portion to get the story rolling...though this reads more like a prolouge for the story.
I will be the first to admit that this story is not as strong as it could be, but given that it's writer has only 3 stories on the site and I havent seen anything else from them yet...(also cause the Vocaloid angle got my attention) I feel this could grow into a very good Sailor Moon/Crossover...if the author is given the right kind of attention and support to help its growth.(but thats only my opinion)
Who needs the light when the shadows are so much more...
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