Sailor Ranko: A Love Story

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Sailor Ranko: A Love Story

Postby burgerbecky » Fri Feb 22, 2008 5:49 pm

I posted the first chapter of my story, which is set between Sailor Ranko, and Twice In A Millennium. I hope you like it. Also, a bit of fan art was done to go with the release by Tran from The Wotch.

Fan art...
http://www.burgerbecky.com/sailorrankofanart_files/page1-1000-full.htm

The story...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4088438/1/Sailor_Ranko_A_Love_Story

Enjoy!

Also, I'll be releasing chapters every Friday morning.
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Postby J. St.C. Patrick » Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:30 am

Author's Notes: Please review my story. It makes me feel oh so happy and stops me from filling your house to the brim with Valentine's day chocolates.

Hmm. Review story or have my house filled to the brim with Valentine's day chocolates

Decisions, Decisions.



Well, as much as I like chocolate....


I enjoyed the chapter and am looking forward to the next one.

(okay, so it's not much of a review, I'm much better at doing Grammar and Spelling checks - and in that regard your chapter is excellent)


Good drawing by Tran.
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Postby Cheb » Mon Feb 25, 2008 11:18 am

The chapter as a whole is nice, but the flashback scene gets long-winded toward the end. Makes the editor's part of me itch and subconsciously grab for scissors. :roll:
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