Wild Magic Chapter 20 (Chapter Finished)

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Postby KonokoHasano » Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:02 pm

Dumbledork wrote:Ranma starting to develop in 4th year only is great. But then it should go really fast for the shock factor. And I'd especially like to see Portrait!Lina's reaction to that and cry about the unfairness of it all.

And what are your plans in the long run for Lucius? Will he try to recruti Ranma and Draco as death eaters for Moldyshorts? After all, Ranko would be a really great asset for Tom.

I can also imagine all the double takes and envious looks from the female populous at Hogwarts. The idea of 'as-Flat-as-a-Board Lina' suddenly becoming 'Voluptuous-as-a-Goddess Lina' is almost enough to make their brains implode in jealousy.

And as of right now, I'm not exactly too sure of how I'm going to do Lucius's role. I do imagine him thinking about the idea of 'Lina' contributing her abilities to the 'great Lord Voldemort', though.
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Postby borgrabbit » Thu Feb 21, 2008 4:55 pm

The Malfoy woman honestly didn’t think the month would turn out like she though, but maybe it will. “Lina.”

thought ??

Lina as an undercover auror? working with Tonks?

Cask of Nannichuan. Ideal. Cold water male curse. What about just plain old transformations from Minerva. A gender swap ought to be easier than a species swap.
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Postby KonokoHasano » Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:09 pm

Wha-huh? :?

I couldn't make heads or tails of that. Do you think you could rephrase it?
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Postby Kimina » Thu Feb 21, 2008 6:49 pm

KonokoHasano wrote:Wha-huh? :?

I couldn't make heads or tails of that. Do you think you could rephrase it?

I think she's suggesting possible plot pieces in non-sentence structured suggestions.
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Postby bissek » Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:22 pm

When the Senshi start getting into the picture, the Ministry of Magic is likely to declare Sailor V to be a felon. After all, Cornelius Fudge, in his infinite lack of wisdom, is far more likely to consider a 13 year old girl who endangers the Statute of Secrecy by using magic without proper supervision to fight monsters to be far more important than the fact that there are monsters on the loose for her to be fighting in the first place.
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Postby lcpoketoon » Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:29 pm

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And as of right now, I'm not exactly too sure of how I'm going to do Lucius's role. I do imagine him thinking about the idea of 'Lina' contributing her abilities to the 'great Lord Voldemort', though.[/quote]


I Think he might be more along the lines of thinking of haveing Lina try to become a Lady of Darkness herself. She already shown a great deal of power for her age. Lucius would see it as more to his benfit to have his out daughter becomeing the power of the wizarding world. After all Ol' Tom lost to a baby why not back his daughter who from a early age shown herself to be very powerful. Maybe the thing that pushes him away from tom is learning he was a half-blood during the 2nd school year.


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Postby bissek » Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:39 pm

True. If Albus had any sense, he'd have broadcast the truth of Voldemort's heritage to the entire wizarding world. Exposing Dark Lord #4127 (Honestly, why do bad guys like calling themselves Dark Lords? Can't they come up with an original title) as being a half-blood destroys his respectability among the pure-bloods. Withholding that information accomplishes nothing.

Albus says that fear of a name increases the fear of the thing itself. He forgot that acknowledging a self-bestowed title grants the person in question more power than they deserve. How much damage would the Death Eaters have been able to do if the media hadn't trained the public to wet their pants whenever the topic of Voldemort came up? Just as the Dread Pirate Roberts struck fear into the hearts of sailors because nobody would run from the Dread Pirate Westley (or Cummerbund, or any of the other guys who called themselves Roberts over the years), the Dark Lord Voldemort exists because nobody would be scared of a guy named Tommy Riddle Jr.
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Postby KonokoHasano » Thu Feb 21, 2008 8:14 pm

bissek: And Fudge would likely crap his pants if Ranma -- if she does end up meeting Sailor V -- ever declared that she was an acquaintance to the 'felon'. After-all, Fudge still has a score with 'Lina' considering that she could give a rat's ass regarding the secrecy law.

lcpoketoon: Hmm... you're right. I actually can see Lucius deciding that his own daughter would be a better choice to stand by in the long run. Even if she doesn't go 'Lady of Darkness' and all, she still has power, and siding with the one who has the power would definitely have slightly more benefits.

Besides, there's also pride that his own daughter is the one with powerful magic and abilities.

:o Honestly, I could see a different Sixth and Seventh Year if Lucius decides to say 'screw it' to Riddle and side with his daughter.
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Postby bissek » Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:03 pm

One point that will be important in the near future storywise - When the Chamber of Secrets was opened, Draco publicly started gloating over the fact that mudbloods would soon be in mortal peril and began listing the names of those he hoped would be petrified or killed first. He never so much as gets reprimanded for this. If anything, the fact that he makes prefect three years later implies that the faculty condoned that kind of behavior.

This time around, Lina should try to do something about her brother's behavior, since nobody else even tries to.
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Postby Anime_Freak317 » Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:45 pm

Okay, more scenes for Ranm...I mean, Lina and family (of the feminine kind). Maybe a trip to see grandma (Triple X from Hoodwinked) who likes extream sports, but tries to hide it from her family.

Then a trip to London. This could be where Ranma meets Sailor V by accident. And a way for Sailor Pom Pom to make a 'FULL' re-appearence. Thanks to the close proximity of one Venus and one Moon Mau, the transformation activates infront of 'mommy-dearest'. (I figured this since everyone was talking about Venus making a grand appearence soon.)
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Postby KonokoHasano » Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:01 pm

Well, Sailor V wouldn't really be on the scene for another few years. Minako would be around nine-years-old at the moment, and she doesn't become Sailor V until she's around 13.

The technicalities of age are really bothersome sometimes.

Still, that doesn't mean that they can't go on a trip to London and -- most likely -- Diagon Alley just to shop. Of course, there's probably other wizarding shops located within London itself.

And I have been debating on whether I should have an appearance of Sailor Pompom so that Narcissa could see it. Since I was going to have a real Pompom scene when Ranma visits Mau in a couple chapters and interacts with Sailor Mau and the other animal Senshi.

Of course, Narcissa's reaction to the Pompom outfit would be too good NOT to do.
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Postby Anime_Freak317 » Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:23 pm

Well, who said that Minako "HAD" to become Venus? The Moon magic is still within her, right? And this could be how Artimis comes into the scene. He finds Pompom instead of V-chan, visits Mau with Ranma and Laria too. Maybe he could even befriend Harry. Well, just a thought.
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Postby CJN » Fri Feb 22, 2008 1:05 am

jasonjkay wrote:Why not, Laira could turn into an immortal time traveling cabbit. Even better, in ship form she could ferry Ranma around time and get into seriouse trouble, maybe even meet the original lina inverse. Still I suppose Pluto would be ultra pissed off. Also I wonder if sailor pom pom will ever meet another senshi, that could be a laugh.


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Postby KonokoHasano » Fri Feb 22, 2008 4:57 am

Anime_Freak317 wrote:Well, who said that Minako "HAD" to become Venus? The Moon magic is still within her, right? And this could be how Artimis comes into the scene. He finds Pompom instead of V-chan, visits Mau with Ranma and Laria too. Maybe he could even befriend Harry. Well, just a thought.

The idea is interesting, but it's a little TOO complicated for what I want to do and all.

CJN: Third Lina? *Knows nothing of Doctor Who except for the first two/three episodes I caught on Youtube a while back*
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Postby CJN » Fri Feb 22, 2008 6:27 am

KonokoHasano wrote:CJN: Third Lina? *Knows nothing of Doctor Who except for the first two/three episodes I caught on Youtube a while back*


Well, my own knowledge is also very limited, but I know that the doctor doesn't die, he regenerate from near-death. This also involves an actor change, so the first doctor was played by the first actor and so on. The wikipedia article explains it better.
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