Ranma vs Nabiki Fic

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Ranma vs Nabiki Fic

Postby antimatterenergy » Mon Jul 03, 2006 1:50 pm

Warning this came to me in that period between being asleep and awake. It was written when I was very exhausted so may be disorganized. This is only one of many ideas I have had for Ranma fics. Also if I do write this things may change like I might find it more amusing for Ranma to lose instead of Nabiki (I just think in a long term battle like this Ranma would win for a variety of reasons (more stubborn, more used to these type of things happening, etc..) with Nabiki doing better in the short term.)
First off even though this has been done in the manga to a lesser degree Ranma is not as disadvantaged as he was before. In this instance Ranma is not going to fall for Nabiki saying she loves him (he is convinced she doesn't) and he's not feeling guilty for destroying her concert tickets or something. In this instance Ranma is mad at Nabiki and not staying on the defensive. Ranma is also going to use Nabiki's own strategies against her using the logic if she can do it so can he.
Ranma and Nabiki have several things in common. Both are willing to go to depths that normal people would consider insane to win, both have little modesty (Nabiki sun bathes without a top at least once during the manga and has no problem wearing revealing clothing), both enjoy manipulating people for their own personal gain and/or amusement, both generally don't think about the long term effects or possible consequences of their actions, both have pretty questionable morals, etc...
Fic starts out with a confrontation between Ranma and Nabiki. Ranma has gotten fed up with her taking pictures of him and decides that since they're pictures of him he should get some of the money. Nabiki says hell no, she took the pictures and it her money. Ranma counters that they are pictures of him and he should get the money. Nabiki says something like it's my money and there isn't a thing you can do about it. What are you going to do beat me up until I give it to you. Won't that look good the big bad martial artist beats up a defenseless girl. Ranma plays the blackmail card and claims that he's going to put these pictures of her all over the school. (Pictures are of her taking a bath and sleeping.) Nabiki says something like How interesting I bet that your fiancees will be really happy that your peeking on another girl. Ranma tears up and melts the pictures. Things pretty much escalate from there with Ranma and Nabiki having pretty much gone to war against each other and they make a bet the person who gives in to the other becomes the others slave for a month (Nabiki in this case is the overconfident one it is her idea since she seems more likely to make this type of bet). With both of them manipulating others to get at each other. (examples. Nabiki making things harder on Ranma by manipulating Ranma's fiancees. Ranma convincing Kuno that a lot of the things happening are Nabiki's fault. Nabiki convinces the parents to switch the engagement back to her so as to better annoy Ranma. Ranma not falling for her tricks and convincing the entire school that Nabiki is a massive pervert and a lesbian (can say things like she likes my girl form and why do you think she is always taking revealing pictures of girls. This also works with Ranma's fiancees so they start really annoying and bothering Nabiki and helps to alienate her from a lot of the girls at school) Ranma using his martial art skills so Nabiki has a whole bunch of seeming accidents that are really perverted like tripping and accidentally pulling down a girls skirt. Nabiki tries renting out Ranma again Ranma counters by renting her out (to clubs and such nothing perverted) using the simple logic if she can do it I can do it. Ranma still saves Nabiki from the fiancees and such but decides to charge her for rescues and when she refuses to pay Ranma allows Shampoo to beat her up a little nothing serious just some bruises. Nabiki out maneuvers and out manipulates Ranma a lot especially at the beginning (occasionally he'll get a good one) and eventually as it progresses and Ranma gets better at it while Nabiki is having a harder time at it because she doesn't know how to handle it and events happen to fast for her to take control of them. (Ranma's used to these type of things happening to him Nabiki is not.) Ranma ends up winning because he's more stubborn and there isn't really anything that Nabiki can do that hasn't already happened to Ranma in one form or another.
While this is occurring Ranma also has to deal with his normal day to day stuff just being made a bit worse because of Nabiki.
Ranma starts to plan ahead and think things through because he needs to in this type of battle. This has a major effect on Ranma's day to day dealings starting with him upping his training and preparing for things before they happen instead of dealing with things as they happen. (example, since he deals with spirits occasionally he prepares to deal with them by learning about them and making spirit wards. another example him making up new Ki techniques in preparation for a fight instead of waiting until someone uses them on him or he needs to come up with it during battle. A technique he may make up would be flying using a combination of old techniques. Iron cloth technique to make a blanket into a hang glider. Minor wind manipulation to keep it aloft. Use of Vacuum blades or Ki blasts to gain speed.)
Ranma also is dealing with aftereffects of the battle with Saffron in which he had thought Akane dead a number of times. Then there was the guilt in having killed Saffron who was a heat source and light for his people, sure he deserved it and he was reborn but that didn't make the guilt go away. Then being knocked unconscious and stuffed into a tuxedo for a wedding that he had no say in and doesn't really know if he wants or not. Then almost getting a cure for the curse only to lose it yet again. Rumors and innuendo at school. Part of the reason he is so into the battle with Nabiki is because it takes his thoughts away from thinking about the above stuff.
These types of things are also happening during this fic. Cramming for finals, which for some reason included reading an entire encyclopedia set and a thesaurus, while his mom kept him company by sitting in the room while sharping and oiling her Katana and Mrs Hinako draining his Ki when he left the room (Nabiki's fault mentions to his mom that Ranma is getting bad grades and shouldn't a martial artist do well in school). Happosai had been extra annoying having found an entire trunk of old magic stuff that he decided to test on Ranma (Ranma convinces Happosai that Nabiki should be targeted by asking for perverted training therefore making Happosai happy and using Nabiki as a training dummy). Kodachi blackmailing him with more doctored photos. Ryoga getting into an argument with Akari and blaming Ranma for it (lots of shi shi hakodens thrown)(this is just a coincidence). Cologne decided to put him through a torture test to see how much he had improved after hearing about the battle with Saffron. Kodachi, Shampoo, and Ukyo upping there pursuit on him by sneaking in to his bed and bath repeatedly (Nabiki helping them), Akane being in a state of near constant anger with Ranma for a variety of reasons (Some because of the other fiancees actions, because she knows about the terms of the bet, and because Nabiki is fanning her anger, etc..). Mouse upping the number of attacks on Ranma because Shampoo has upped her pursuit on Ranma, Kuno being Kuno, Principal trying to cut his hair, an average of two unknown people coming to challenge Ranma per day for reasons Ranma doesn't bother to find out or care, What little amount of a relationship Ranma has with Akane is going completely down the drain and Ranma decides that it may be better that way, Ect...
Part two would be about Nabiki's slavery (really bad for Nabiki because Ranma's mom, Happosai (owning a girl is like his biggest dream), and Cologne (for amusement value) decide to give Ranma advice - doesn't mean Ranma's going to use they're advice but it may influence him) and Ranma and Nabiki getting caught up in the Sailor Senshi battles somehow (probably a misunderstanding of some type with them thinking that Ranma's evil and enslaving others).
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Postby migele » Mon Jul 03, 2006 5:24 pm

It has potential, I agree.
from what I understood you want to place this post Saffron?
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Postby antimatterenergy » Mon Jul 03, 2006 6:33 pm

Yeah post Saffron. I original thought of diverging during the time Nabiki was his fiancee but thought post Saffron would be better since that is a point where Ranma may decide that he has to anticipate his enemies and plan ahead instead of being reactive. After all Akane almost died several times, he was forced to kill, he deprived an entire race of their primary source of heat and light, he almost died, he was almost married, and he was almost cured. I figure anyone of those incidents could be enough to break someone of their habits and analyze their life and start thinking about the past. Thinking things like could I have done it differently and if it happened again what would I do differently. If i do write this fic those types of thoughts as well as having to make better plans so as to counter Nabiki would break him out of his live in the moment thought patterns. Make him decide what he wants to do with his life as well as rethink past events and actually prepare for things that may happen instead of dealing with things as they happen. There are other incidents in the manga that could be used to change how Ranma thinks but never so many at one time.
Ranma's biggest fault in my opinion is that he doesn't plan ahead and doesn't think things through. The primary purpose of this fic would be to lesson that fault of his and do it in a somewhat believable way (i.e. this could have happened in the manga way). That fault is good for comedies but I later want to make the fic more serious (the sailormoon part) and a Ranma who thinks things through and plans ahead is a lot better for a serious fic. A secondary purpose is that this is also a good and somewhat believable way to break up Ranma and Akane. With her being mad most of the time because of Nabiki and Ranma's activities, Ranma having Nabiki as a slave, and Ranma being to busy to really spend time with her (new training and plans take time) (making her feel like he's ignoring her). It makes it much easier for Akane to start dating someone to make Ranma jealous and then leading to a complete break up when he's to busy to really notice.
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Postby migele » Tue Jul 04, 2006 8:46 am

The pranking war would make Akane almost kill Ranma. so that in itself would alienate them already.
"Have you been making life hard for Nabiki again?" mallet-sama.
As for general. you would have to place a lot of depth into the interaction. even adding butterfly effect stuff into this story to make it truly work I suspect.it is based on relationships and that'S the hardest part.
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Postby Rei-chan » Tue Jul 04, 2006 9:24 am

My question about this idea is who are you intending to pair up with Ranma if the Ranma/Akane pairing falls apart? A senshi in the later part or perhaps Nabiki? As you said the two (Ranma and Nabiki) are very much alike so I just have to ask what the intended pairing is for this.
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Postby Akhorahil » Tue Jul 04, 2006 10:56 am

vote for Ranma Hotaru ^^
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Postby Pale Wolf » Tue Jul 04, 2006 11:12 am

Seems you and I agree for once :)
Although I'll say it probably depends on exactly how Ranma develops, what'll suit the fic best.
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Postby antimatterenergy » Tue Jul 04, 2006 12:48 pm

I haven't really thought about who to pair him up with though it defininately will not be Akane, Nabiki (Nabiki isn't going to like Ranma especially since she loses and then has to serve him.) or a guy. Though since Hotaru is my favorite senshi it would be likely her but it might be multiple for a while (ex. hotaru to shy to ask him out by herself so Jupitor goes as well or something).
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