Strained Harmony, chapter 1

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Postby Dumbledork » Sat Feb 03, 2007 10:18 pm

Hehehe. Thank God I'm a civil servant. My boss gives a rat's ass as to what we do as long as the work is finished. After all, we don't get paid for our poductivity ^_^
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Postby borgrabbit » Fri Apr 13, 2007 2:56 pm

I spotted this on FFN and thought I'd point it out.
Overall the uniform a blend of sophisticated and traditional styles that reflected the tastes of her employer.

Overall, the uniform was a blend of sophisticated and traditional styles that reflected the tastes of her employer.

OH MY GOD! I've read this thing about five times to keep it fresh in memory for the next chapter. Please write another. :lol:
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P.S. Regarding 'Lingerie Setsuna', I was watching AMG and Peorth's normal costume would be pushing it (at least) as much as Setsuna and it appears that Peorth is quite into leather.
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Postby Dumbledork » Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:06 pm

OH MY GOD! I've read this thing about five times to keep it fresh in memory for the next chapter. Please write another.


Hehehe, me two. I've read it AT LEAST 5 times.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Apr 13, 2007 4:45 pm

borgrabbit wrote:
OH MY GOD! I've read this thing about five times to keep it fresh in memory for the next chapter. Please write another. :lol:
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P.S. Regarding 'Lingerie Setsuna', I was watching AMG and Peorth's normal costume would be pushing it (at least) as much as Setsuna and it appears that Peorth is quite into leather.


Thanks fixed the change. Hmm..I should really update the ff.net version. Or at least make a temp page for all my fics on the fukufics server. But masters thesis...

Heh that's good for Setsuna and maybe for Nanny Ranma ;p

Dumbledord: Hehehe, me two. I've read it AT LEAST 5 times.

I'm still a bit amazed at how well-recieved that fic is. Guess Tri and I did something right.
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Postby Yrael » Fri Apr 13, 2007 6:11 pm

Sunshine wrote:I'm still a bit amazed at how well-recieved that fic is. Guess Tri and I did something right.


Definitely. Of course, that does mean we'll see a new chapter very soon...right? :)
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Postby borgrabbit » Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:36 am

But masters thesis...

Yeah, a lot of my co-workers have been through that masters and doctoral junk. I just didn't have the spine or resources to go through it myself. A bachelors degree was 'tuff enuff' for me.

Not asking for any spoilers but it would be cool to 'see' Ranma get a fuku with a different twist...like black deerskin, soft, fuzzy and supple. :wink:

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Postby Cheb » Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:54 am

Ranma said as she pushed her glasses back up. Bowing was always a pain while wearing them.

Did she get a defective pair?
Because, as a person wearing glasses my entire life, I must note that a properly designed pair of glasses holds firm no matter waht you do - jump, hang upside down, swim, dive... Only a direct hit of soccer ball could bring the thing down.
Not to say about bowing.
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Postby Dumbledork » Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:00 am

It's stated in the fic itself, if I remember correctly (and I should when you look at the number of times I've read it ^_^), that those are the glasses Ranma used for her 'Yoiko' disguise when she tricked Ryoga. So boviously she didn't go to an ophthalmologist for a prescription. Those are prop glasses in my opinion.

Later on she bought a regular pair.
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