Night Shift 3

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Re: Night Shift 3

Postby ijp92 » Sun Mar 09, 2014 1:01 am

Well how old is Chibi-Usa physically in your fic?

We know that Furinkan has a pre-school because Midori (the teacher Happosai fell in love with) worked there.

There was also the two kids who thought Happosai was Santa Claus (I don't know how old they were though.)

hmm. Furinkan (or any one of the neighboring also fictional towns from the manga/anime) likely has its own primary school. But if you want something from another manga or anime... the only ones I can think of that take place in Nerima Ward are Nerima Daikon Brothers and All Purpose Cat Girl Nuku Nuku. Neither of which feature an elementary school. ...well NDB might but I don't think so.

EDIT

wait.

St. Hebereke's School for Girls (named St. Bacchus's School for Girls in the manga, which is mentioned as a nickname in the anime)
the wiki calls it a Catholic unisex high school.
But you could say that the same church runs a primary school too.
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Re: Night Shift 3

Postby LawOhki » Sun Mar 09, 2014 5:50 am

ijp92 wrote:Well how old is Chibi-Usa physically in your fic?

We know that Furinkan has a pre-school because Midori (the teacher Happosai fell in love with) worked there.

There was also the two kids who thought Happosai was Santa Claus (I don't know how old they were though.)

hmm. Furinkan (or any one of the neighboring also fictional towns from the manga/anime) likely has its own primary school. But if you want something from another manga or anime... the only ones I can think of that take place in Nerima Ward are Nerima Daikon Brothers and All Purpose Cat Girl Nuku Nuku. Neither of which feature an elementary school. ...well NDB might but I don't think so.

EDIT

wait.

St. Hebereke's School for Girls (named St. Bacchus's School for Girls in the manga, which is mentioned as a nickname in the anime)
the wiki calls it a Catholic unisex high school.
But you could say that the same church runs a primary school too.

She's 8/9 physically.

Could make St. Bacchus be an elevator school and there's a joke from the senshi on now she has to stay there and finish out her schooling. With some other little girl who wants to be just like Kodachi! Usa has pink hair, that's close enough to that red haired harlot her Kodachi-sama loathes! They are even seen together, it must be fated!

Ugh yet another plot line that can become it's own story. :evil:
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Re: Night Shift 3

Postby frice2000 » Sun Mar 09, 2014 11:28 am

Elementary School? Psh. Nodoka asks about schooling, Usa pulls out a few dozen diplomas, and Nodoka just nods. Then a couple weeks later tells her to go to back to University and get her Doctorate!
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Re: Night Shift 3

Postby WG_Writer » Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:51 pm

at 8-9 she is required to attend school legally, but if she can fake paperwork she could pass as 10 and not have to go...


I am not familiar with much in the way of japanese schools set in fictional Nerima but taking a look at the map of Nerima on google maps I do see the "American School" (literal name) that could be used as a joke that Nodoka refuses it because the name is so untraditional ... :lol:
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Re: Night Shift 3

Postby LawOhki » Sun Mar 09, 2014 5:08 pm

WG_Writer wrote:at 8-9 she is required to attend school legally, but if she can fake paperwork she could pass as 10 and not have to go...


I am not familiar with much in the way of japanese schools set in fictional Nerima but taking a look at the map of Nerima on google maps I do see the "American School" (literal name) that could be used as a joke that Nodoka refuses it because the name is so untraditional ... :lol:

As though Nodoka would ever let her... relative skip out on school. How can she possibly hope to impress upon Ranma the importance of his education if she's not consistent?
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Re: Night Shift 3

Postby frice2000 » Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:11 pm

At some point good ideas regardless of merit have to stop. Begins to be too much bloat.

Congrats on 200 posts in this thread :)!
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